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[Cerpen] Dia... Bidadari Terpilih Buatku. (Page 4)

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Post time 7-6-2014 10:39 PM | Show all posts
NaylaArisha posted on 7-6-2014 10:25 PM
hehhe okay nicki thanks for reading....

nay saja nak try

Takde maknanyeee otai. Petai iya kot?

Sambunglah Nay. Nice storyline. Ubah suai sana sini, dah boleh jadi novel.


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 Author| Post time 7-6-2014 10:48 PM | Show all posts
Nicki_Meow posted on 7-6-2014 10:39 PM
Takde maknanyeee otai. Petai iya kot?  

Sambunglah Nay. Nice storyline. Ubah suai san ...

hahahhaa,... x nak nanti jadik macam FA...

berbulan nicki nak habis kan

sambung jadik cerpan kot

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Post time 7-6-2014 11:22 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
anna-zara posted on 7-6-2014 08:40 PM
xleh2 kena paksa nay panjangkan lagi

cerita dah best dah tu

Akak rasa for begining
Thats so gud
X tahu la kalau panjang lagi kn
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Post time 7-6-2014 11:40 PM | Show all posts
wah momod nay wat cerpen pulak... terbaik ni... tapi apasal dah abeh ?

sambung la lagi... mane tau leh dibukukan... meletops nama @NaylaArisha

dah glamer sok jangan lupa kawan2 lak...
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 Author| Post time 7-6-2014 11:48 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
punkerzoe posted on 7-6-2014 11:40 PM
wah momod nay wat cerpen pulak... terbaik ni... tapi apasal dah abeh ?

sambung la lagi... mane ta ...

akan di sambung selepas desakan demi desakan oleh @anna-zara n lenlain
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Post time 7-6-2014 11:52 PM | Show all posts
NaylaArisha posted on 7-6-2014 11:48 PM
akan di sambung selepas desakan demi desakan oleh @anna-zara n lenlain

memang patut disambung nay... pendek sangat tu...

jalan cite dah best tu... berdasarkan ape apit bace mungkin nay bleh wat macam flashback tu banyak2 sikit...



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 Author| Post time 7-6-2014 11:58 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
punkerzoe posted on 7-6-2014 11:52 PM
memang patut disambung nay... pendek sangat tu...

jalan cite dah best tu... berdasarkan ape api ...

okay nay cuba olah semula
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Post time 8-6-2014 12:00 AM | Show all posts
NaylaArisha posted on 7-6-2014 11:58 PM
okay nay cuba olah semula

good...
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Post time 8-6-2014 01:20 AM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
Good job TT...
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Post time 8-6-2014 02:37 AM | Show all posts
jarang ada cerita2 yg mcmni.. yg ceritakan ttg ayah. kebanyakkan lebih pada kisah ppuan, ibu tunggal. mgkin sbb lelaki ni dianggap kuat, jarang yg jaga ank sendiri lepas cerai..

tapi klu hang selam balik, byk kisah menarik yg org tk tau. suka duka idup sendiri, jaga ank sendiri..
sbb.. lelaki jgk mcm ppuan, ada hati, ada perasaan.

aku rasa.. klu hang buat lagi.. cuba lebihkan pasai tu. tu cuma pandangan aku. sori komen aku lari sikit.

tapi pada aku, apa yg hang tulis ni lain dari lain & ini dah cukup baik.
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Post time 8-6-2014 08:38 AM | Show all posts
NaylaArisha posted on 7-6-2014 04:20 PM
Percubaan pertama..... Just nak sharing.

Ilham tercipta dengan pengalaman hidup seorang ayah.

bagus
nanti boleh tambah karya lagi
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 Author| Post time 8-6-2014 08:46 AM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
ciksurie posted on 8-6-2014 08:38 AM
bagus
nanti boleh tambah karya lagi

thanks cik su
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Post time 8-6-2014 10:38 AM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
NaylaArisha posted on 7-6-2014 04:20 PM
Percubaan pertama..... Just nak sharing.

Ilham tercipta dengan pengalaman hidup seorang ayah.

Mn ada gelak..kagum..nay ada bakat menulis..x puas bc..pendek sgt..mksdnya positive feedback...

Trskan berkarya..tq tag nov...

Nk tau jgk mlm pertama ngan wajah di sebalik niqab..
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 Author| Post time 8-6-2014 12:03 PM | Show all posts
novelloverzz posted on 8-6-2014 10:38 AM
Mn ada gelak..kagum..nay ada bakat menulis..x puas bc..pendek sgt..mksdnya positive feedback...

...

muahahhaha... orait.. akan di pertimbangkan

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Post time 8-6-2014 12:20 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
NaylaArisha posted on 8-6-2014 12:03 PM
muahahhaha... orait.. akan di pertimbangkan

Mcm biasa sila tag sbb nov jrg meronda
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Post time 8-6-2014 01:08 PM | Show all posts
amiraira posted on 7-6-2014 11:22 PM
Akak rasa for begining
Thats so gud
X tahu la kalau panjang lagi kn

hahaha....nay dah terhasut untuk sambung tu
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Post time 8-6-2014 01:09 PM | Show all posts
NaylaArisha posted on 7-6-2014 11:48 PM
akan di sambung selepas desakan demi desakan oleh @anna-zara n lenlain

aah untuk konflik tu boleh buat flash back...

ataupun kekasih lama yang direjek muncul kembali membuat onar
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 Author| Post time 8-6-2014 01:13 PM | Show all posts
anna-zara posted on 8-6-2014 01:09 PM
aah untuk konflik tu boleh buat flash back...

ataupun kekasih lama yang direjek muncul kembali  ...

x nay akan buat lain tunggu

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Post time 8-6-2014 01:24 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
anna-zara posted on 8-6-2014 01:08 PM
hahaha....nay dah terhasut untuk sambung tu

Bila panjang2 sgt nnti
Dh lari dr intipati yg sebenar
Tu akak suka yg mcm ni je
Padat
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Post time 8-6-2014 02:19 PM | Show all posts
amiraira posted on 8-6-2014 01:24 PM
Bila panjang2 sgt nnti
Dh lari dr intipati yg sebenar
Tu akak suka yg mcm ni je

xla pandai la nay control tu nanti....


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