[HORA] SiNGiNG WiTH iZ RiJaP ♫ iF You CoMe BaCK ♫

seroja

alewww... abg iz da tdo kew?

alyana

" tengah dengar khayal" - alyana

seroja

"nak berkhayal.." - tajah

alyana

"First of all, lagu Khayal amat asing bagi ai, and ai tak jumpe studio version lagu ini for accurate pitching. so whenever i said flat, doesn't necessarily mean u flat*although most prob u flat *, just need you to recheck back,

"your tone geeting better, and i do agree with abang fairuz, that you need to play with ketebalan and kenipisan suara to make this singing better, make it groovy and with attitude" - alyana

"but overall, ai definitely enjoy your singing"

so my roughly finding- sebab ai tak study in detail this song, so my comment as per below, if ai find the original ai might update the pitching wise
hmmm //buruk
ooo //buruk
yeyehh // buruk

Ini bukanlah cerita // best
Tetapi kisah benar //best but you can make mild hook here
Tolong percaya...// word percaya bagi emotion, do breathy thing, then akan jadi best. sbb at this one u can color it, so it will touch our heart, hoo is ok, quite flat
Tidurku makin terganggu // growling sangat buruk, habislah ai dapat mimipi ngeri malam nie and flat
Kerana kamu buat aku tak menentu // "tak menentu" ai suspect flat
Siang malam teringat kamu // "teringat kamu" not dramatic + i suspect flat,

(Chorus)
Khayal, tak dapat dikawal // ok, best sgt!
Rindu makin tebal //ok
Sejak mula kenal // ok, but i suspect "kenal" flat
Berikanlah aku satu //ok
Peluang saja
Agar dapat kita bersama

Aku kan terus mencuba // ok
Sampai kita bersua //almost nice!, "bersua" jadikan lebih seksi
Pasti bahagia // ok, "gia" ai suspect flat
Jika tidak pasti parah // parah flat a lil
Terhilang arah // arah flat a lil
Begitu sakit merindu // merindu ai suspect flat a lil
Teringatkan dkerdipanmu // "mu" flat, bagi dramatic here!

Jadi sampai kemana //ok but sounded semput
perlu aku disiksa //ok but sounded semput lack breath support i think
gara-gara cinta // best! disconnect masa u sebut cinTHa, so awesome

yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee // nice belting
hooo // good mood
hooooooooooo // good
yeeeeeeyeeeeeheeeee // nice belting for me but jadikan ia sounded more beautiful
Khayal, tak dapat dikawal //
Rindu makin tebal // ok
Sejak mula kenal // "kenal" ai suspect flat
yeeeeehee // ok
Berikanlah aku satu //ok
Peluang saja // ok but you can colorkan part ini , 'saja' ai suspect flat
Agar dapat kita bersama // "bersama" flat lagi, bagi dramatic, powerhouise kat bersama

Berikanlah aku satu // ok
Peluang saja //ok
Agar dapat kita bersama // "sama" ai suspect flat
ye heh ye heh // flat and semput, breath support noque!
oooooooooooooo // ok
hooooooooo // semput, breath support noque!

alyana

Originally posted by Urban_Iz at 1-1-2009 09:19 PM
yana, i wanna know more when you said that i managed to removed shreak in the vowels...i don't pretty understand about that...

p/s: maybe you wanna comment on my latest recording whichi is Kha ...

"mean you overload sebutan for "O", "A" and "E",   biasanya "A" and "O", so it will sounded darker and deeper but FAKE and FORCE. ai rasa, this thing also important .  istilah mudah shrek  ajee *pinjam istilah oja *. konon feeling nak opera but salah isme noque. " - alyana

alyana

"guyss,, ai baru berjaya menjelajah lagu Aliff - Akan Tiba" - alyana

"
To me, I'm surprise that orang macam Aliff can deliver this song SUPER GOOD! OMG!, ai rasa if he work it alone, he will never reach this level.
The person who in charge his vocal must be very PARTICULAR *teliti* and do her/his job very well. It was so musically beautifull, soulful, sassy...
very unique! and colourful. in short his careography was wow!. tak sangka. so black blood in Aliff!!! OMG. I'm fall in luv with his singing! so cute, sassy,soulful and ...   

I believe this single was produce in very high quality vocal attention.

So if uols nak buat rendition of this song, hati2 k! pitching superb, i mean he pegang hold the note firmly! although in falsetto!!! siapa penjaga vocal dunia untuk rakaman lagu ini, ai amat kagum! "  - alyana

alyana

"but vidoe is very bad, his singing as his mouth not sycn , salah directoR :@ :@ :@ " - alyana

alyana

"lagu ini dicipta oleh Amylea, OMG takkanlah AMylea yang jaga vocal Aliif for this recordingg , ai tak percayaaaa , but good song tho  " - alyana

chubby_gay

khayal - over do it!!

i sedar yg u suka menhjerit2 masa menyanyi..

u should sing, not screaming...

i know u can reach that high notes but when u over do it, its annoying...

jerit2 tu bkan maknenye u bagus..

but as i said earlier, u tone is so ordinary, many people having dat...

Urban_Iz

thanks semua sebab bago comment...terlampau banyak nak bagi feedback satu²...btw, thanks a lot...i will try my best to improve my singing...

Urban_Iz

boring duduk rumah, so rakam lagi lagu baru...

actually lagu ni kawan aku request sebab dia suka sangat dengan lagu ni...hurm, tapi aku rasa macam banyak flat plak...kalau korang rasa macam aku menjerit tu, ntahla tak tau nak cakap macam mana actually i'm just trying to reach the rightr note...

anyhow, please leave your comment...links can be obtained in the first post...

the_builder

wah good try Iz...memula lagu sedap control bokal ko   ...sedap dgr....part chorus bole improve lagi....but overall not bad...

p/s : ur pronounciation good........keep it up....tp ko edit guna apa ek..siap ada backup bokal....nak gak buat...hehehe

Urban_Iz

thanks for listening and for your comment...aku memang suka lagu crush ni...tapi tak pernah terfikir nak nyanyikannya...cuma baru² kawan aku nak aku nyanyi lagu ni so aku buat je lah..

builder, dalam forum ni kau lah orang pertama yang cakap pronunciation aku bagus...all these while, aku punya pronunciation kene kutuk...walaupun aku bila speaking guna american accent...

Urban_Iz

lupa plak nak bagitau tadi, aku mix guna Acoustica Mixcraft v2.50...

alyana

Originally posted by the_builder at 5-1-2009 02:54 PM
wah good try Iz...memula lagu sedap control bokal ko   ...sedap dgr....part chorus bole improve lagi....but overall not bad...

p/s : ur pronounciation good........keep it up....tp  ...

"lepas dah siap sis cepat2 tau buat thread disini, kami semua share same interest dgn u, insyaAllah, sama2lah kita sharing is caring   " - alyana

mee_maggie

british accent la hawt

pd kaka mee tak berapa menyengat la iz nyanyi lagu ini. Lebey ske lagu khayal

mungkin yana ley rekemenkan lagu english yg vley wat vocal iz menyerlah

alyana

Originally posted by mee_maggie at 5-1-2009 08:14 PM
british accent la hawt

pd kaka mee tak berapa menyengat la iz nyanyi lagu ini. Lebey ske lagu khayal

mungkin yana ley rekemenkan lagu english yg vley wat vocal iz menyerlah

"accent Iz agak berlainan dr David Archuleta, am not sure whether this is good or not, but maybe ade kelebihan tersendiri,

awal2 agak shaky, suara  menggigil *not vibrato* , meaning voice control agak tak kemas maybe sebab tgh musim hujan, so cuaca agak sejuk then Iz agak tak berapa sedia masa recording and you out of tune quite a lot.

Your rendition somehow kill the song  sebab kita dah terbiasa dgn tone david yang bold, dan lunak, sedangkan u dari species crystal clear, so bila you try to hit high not for this song,it was sounded so painful. it was not musically beautiful, in fact, u sounded strain  and forceful, i mean it was like kucing parsi yang mengerang kerana dikasi u know *am so sorry to use this word, sbb ai tak tahu nak gunakan ayat yg tepat *. So quite creepy.

Meaning, u need to work out more on your high note, or maybe find another technique? Styling sgt2 tak kemas,  overall agak bersepah. falsetto to me, ok lah ....... oh kak mee, kena cari lagu yang ala2 hartisnya crystal clear jua , nampaknya. , pun begitu keep on experimenting, nanti u akan jumpa jua the correct genre and song that suit u. I believe u can!.  2.5 / 5 star" - alyana

[ Last edited by  alyana at 5-1-2009 08:46 PM ]

Urban_Iz

thanks yana...i have expected this comment from you sebab aku sendiri tak puas hati dengan my performance clearly this type of song memang tak sesuai dengan my vocal kan...i just do this for the sake of a friend's request...actually, lagu What I've Done by Linkin Park ada rancang jugak nak rakam...this type of song yang memang belt gila² kan...nak experiment lagi...nanti kalau dah siap i update...

p/s: actually, aku pecah perut sangat² baca komen yana tau...very the funny...i miss this kind of comment...

underwoodrockz

wood pun kurang gemar versi iz berbanding death pny version....

tp still worth to listen...

Urban_Iz

death pun ada record crush ke??? tak tau plak...