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Originally posted by Mr.Forensics at 6-9-2005 03:58 AM
elop sumer...
banyak sangat yang menimpa sejak sebulan ni....
memula balik kg..
pastu terlantar kat ward 2 minggu..
balik jb dah kena pi kursus kat miri...ni baru balik....
huhu..cerita ni ...
dah jadi kubur...saudara mara dia tak ada ker...
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sedey sket cite ni :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: |
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ninanurin This user has been deleted
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hmmm thanks for sharing....such a nice and beautiful writting...
will be waiting for more |
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Mr.Forensics This user has been deleted
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tiba2 je ada orang gali balik citer aku nih.
hahahhaha |
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tue la.. aku pon terkejut tengok ada cerita yang 3 page tapi mcm tak pernah nampak.. hehehehe
nway, nice thought.. |
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suka citer ni tatau nk komen lebih |
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ninanurin This user has been deleted
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Reply #64 Mr.Forensics's post
saya baru join kat sini la....
mana tau ada gak org yg tak baca lagi boleh lah baca |
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Mr.Forensik..
There's a mistery n misery di sebalik cerita ni...
Nway, not bad n kinda like it esp. ending citer nih...
"saya selalu berpesan supaya mereka menjaga selipar atau kasut mereka sebaik-baiknya,saya tidak pernah lupa tentang ini." (moral of da story) |
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Saya pon ada selipar sebelah jer tinggal...
mlm2 anjing dtg cuwik selipar sebelah jer... |
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menarik nyer
lain dr yg lain.. |
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Bila dapat jumpa selipar yang sebelah lagi  |
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Emmm, 1st time masuk writer's room, n cerpen ni best, ada mesej n rasa nk smbung je baca smpai abis... Mr.Forensik, good story  |
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hiiii mr poren......
sewaktu In melilau di sini terpndang SELIPAR SEBELAH... xde niat nk lepak lama2, ingat nk belek2 jer... sbb adik sepupu
duk panggil ajak main badminton.... namun selipar sebelah benar2 teruja.... In habiskan mmbacanya dgn hati tetiba rasa sebak...
benar2 hidup cerpen mr poren... tahniah dr In.. benar kata fourmer di atas... sperti penulisan faisal tehrani....
nanti In dtg jenguk lagi.... |
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Category: Belia & Informasi
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Post time 14-9-2005 08:59 PM
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