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huhuhu lama tak baca citer camni....sedih  |
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good story.simple but nice. tp banyak 2 ayat yg bersambung. kene perbaiki taipan.. |
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good story.simple but nice. tp banyak 2 ayat yg bersambung. kene perbaiki taipan.. |
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dh bc...mula2 cam malas sbb x fhm bahasa sastera....
tp overall ok la...nice try.... |
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Ini dapat idea dari lagu juara AF 8 Shahirlah ni...
Baca cerita ni ternpk VC si shahir tu...
Bagus rajin2 tulis cerpen pendek... teruskan |
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Reply 17# ShahGraphixer
sama2....  teruskan berkaya k, kte enjoy baca  |
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Category: Belia & Informasi
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Post time 20-10-2010 08:49 AM
