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Post time 5-1-2019 02:20 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts |Read mode
Indah itu datang dengan tidak mudah.
Berliku jalannya

Bernyanyi tapi tak merdu.
Bersuara tapi bertingkah
Memandang tapi tak melihat

Dia
Punya suara.
Punya rasa.

Terima atau sirna

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Post time 5-1-2019 04:34 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
saya lihat pandangan matanya,...tidak berkedip..

Saya lihat sinar wajahnya,...Kaku

Saya letakkan tangan saya tepat
dijantungnya.....Saya tau dia hidup, Dia faham saya..Dia tahu sukma saya...




saya senyum sendirian....

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 Author| Post time 5-1-2019 04:42 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
multinicky replied at 5-1-2019 04:34 PM
saya lihat pandangan matanya,...tidak berkedip..

Saya lihat sinar wajahnya,...Kaku

Oh my this is good
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Post time 5-1-2019 04:52 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
Berkarang sepi tidak berduka... Berbuah bahagia,  tidak tersenyum
Selalu dipandang, tidak melihat...
Seribu rahsia, tidak terbongkar
Berdiam diri dlm seribu bahasa,
Apakah tujuan engkau diciptakan.... Apakah rahsia di sebalik wajahmu itu..





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Post time 5-1-2019 05:21 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
noraidil_06 replied at 5-1-2019 04:42 PM
Oh my this is good

hahahah.. lame meols x on mood jiwang n layan perasan. meols kekadang sensatif orangye
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Post time 5-1-2019 05:35 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
I xreti nk susun ayat bersajak mcm uols..
Tp iols kagum dgn uols yg bleh bg ayat2 berbunga2 bersajak gini... mmg boleh buat spontan ke bina ayat gini?

Oh i SR je lah

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 Author| Post time 5-1-2019 05:39 PM | Show all posts
aechae replied at 5-1-2019 05:35 PM
I xreti nk susun ayat bersajak mcm uols..
Tp iols kagum dgn uols yg bleh bg ayat2 berbunga2 bersaja ...

Spontan.

Eh jgnla SR. Bod ni bukan bod sajak pun. Tulis mcm biasa je.
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Post time 5-1-2019 05:49 PM | Show all posts
i suka baca nukilan kaka nora..
nak buat sendiri, mmg x reti..
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Post time 5-1-2019 06:30 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
Terus teringat kisah kesusasteraan melayu lama yg belajar masa sekolah dulu.. kisah patung chendana.. chendana bermaksud emas, patung tu diperbuat dari emas, putera raja nak hadiahkan pada tunangnya.. namun di balut dengan kain buruk supaya tidak direbut oleh adik tiri tunangnya.. seronok kisah tu..

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Post time 5-1-2019 06:37 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
rasa seram tengok gambar patung tu lama2

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 Author| Post time 5-1-2019 06:38 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
sapeka replied at 5-1-2019 06:37 PM
rasa seram tengok gambar patung tu lama2

Hahahahhaaha
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Post time 5-1-2019 07:29 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
noraidil_06 replied at 5-1-2019 06:38 PM
Hahahahhaaha

huhu...tapi kreatip betul akak boleh buat puisi
sy kn asahkan otak sy jd lebih kreatip macam akak
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 Author| Post time 5-1-2019 07:32 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
sapeka replied at 5-1-2019 07:29 PM
huhu...tapi kreatip betul akak boleh buat puisi
sy kn asahkan otak sy jd lebih kreatip macam akak

Awwe tq. Akk nk meriahkan bod jagaan je.
Tp berbesar hati kalau org lain buka thread. Cerita psl hati n perasaan ke, psl kasih sayang pd keluarga ke.
X yah puitis pun
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Post time 5-1-2019 10:05 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
Patung cendana...
Kekadang aku rasa isteri yg terbelenggu dgn kehendak suami jg ibarat patung cendana
Diluah mati emak ditelan mati bapak
Begitulah perumpaannya
Tdk semua isteri bebas utk meluahkan pendapat
Kekadang terpaksa mengikut kehendak suami tnp rela...

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 Author| Post time 5-1-2019 10:25 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
anakkerengga replied at 5-1-2019 10:05 PM
Patung cendana...
Kekadang aku rasa isteri yg terbelenggu dgn kehendak suami jg ibarat patung cenda ...

Puisi sy ni mengarah ke situlah
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Post time 5-1-2019 10:27 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
aechae replied at 5-1-2019 05:35 PM
I xreti nk susun ayat bersajak mcm uols..
Tp iols kagum dgn uols yg bleh bg ayat2 berbunga2 bersaja ...

Hahaha... Keluar secara spontan... Jikalau ilham mendatang
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Post time 5-1-2019 11:37 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
noraidil_06 replied at 5-1-2019 10:25 PM
Puisi sy ni mengarah ke situlah


Kekadang...apa yg tersurat dr yg tersirat.. suara tdk dpt bersuara ..penggantinya hanyalah tinta.. walau digelar konvensional..tp itulah wanita.. bukan pemuja sang pria hingga menurut tanpa rela...tp pegangan agama tetap menjadi yg pertama..melawan bukan lah jalan nya

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 Author| Post time 5-1-2019 11:59 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
anakkerengga replied at 5-1-2019 11:37 PM
Kekadang...apa yg tersurat dr yg tersirat.. suara tdk dpt bersuara ..penggantinya hanyalah tinta ...

Hugs sis.
Been there done that..
In the end Allah bg juge bahagia yg kite cari. InsyaAllah
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Post time 6-1-2019 12:08 AM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
noraidil_06 replied at 5-1-2019 11:59 PM
Hugs sis.
Been there done that..
In the end Allah bg juge bahagia yg kite cari. InsyaAllah


In syaa Allah .. semua org berhak utk bahagia
Jika dunia bukan tempatnya.. moga akhirat nnt kita akan temuinya....
ramai wanita memendam rasa sehingga dada membengkak seakan mahu meletup...
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Post time 6-1-2019 12:43 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
noraidil_06 replied at 5-1-2019 05:39 PM
Spontan.

Eh jgnla SR. Bod ni bukan bod sajak pun. Tulis mcm biasa je.

SR je mampu sis mod...
Kdg2 baca ada yg uols sume coretkn tu related dgn diri ini gtuuu...

I ni klu down frust ke xbleh nk ayat jiwang gini, iols maki skali pastu move on lupa trus je
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