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Post time 7-1-2009 07:08 PM | Show all posts
Originally posted by donbotak at 7-1-2009 07:00 PM
wa dah tau!!!


awak itu sapa............


sape weyyyyyyyyyyyyy
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Post time 7-1-2009 07:10 PM | Show all posts

Balas #281 Madura1\ catat

kikikikikik..............kan wa dah terang kat atas tu...
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Post time 7-1-2009 07:11 PM | Show all posts
Originally posted by lily_kama at 7-1-2009 07:08 PM


kejam utk sebelah pihak je.........

puitis tu tuk sebelah pihak jekk...selepas dr kejadian tu...awak ada bg explanation...yg tu...xde lg puitis....pemuitis hanya bercerita tentang dia..tentang jiwa yang mati di sana..
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Post time 7-1-2009 07:12 PM | Show all posts
wa nak gelakkk
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Post time 7-1-2009 07:13 PM | Show all posts
pesal org tu gelak mcm tu gilo ko apo
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Post time 7-1-2009 07:16 PM | Show all posts
memang ghilakkkk
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 Author| Post time 7-1-2009 10:30 PM | Show all posts
wat eva la korg nih blur la wa........awka tuh bg wa manusia bodoh
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Post time 7-1-2009 11:46 PM | Show all posts
Originally posted by raudah at 7-1-2009 07:11 PM

puitis tu tuk sebelah pihak jekk...selepas dr kejadian tu...awak ada bg explanation...yg tu...xde lg puitis....pemuitis hanya bercerita tentang dia..tentang jiwa yang mati di sana..


'awak' tu agak kejam...

x reti nak menyelami hati si pemuitis..

atau sengaja membiarkan si pemuitis...

'awak' tu ego...

bangga dgn keegoaan yg dimilikinya...
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Post time 7-1-2009 11:46 PM | Show all posts
Originally posted by otakotak at 7-1-2009 10:30 PM
wat eva la korg nih blur la wa........awka tuh bg wa manusia bodoh


ada story di sebalik 'awak'

jgn cpat buat spekulasi bodoh jugak
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Post time 7-1-2009 11:53 PM | Show all posts
kan wa dah cakap..............awak itu ialah handfon..........
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Post time 7-1-2009 11:56 PM | Show all posts

Reply #291 donbotak's post

lu sebok naper...

lu nak anggap handpon.. handpon la :@
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Post time 7-1-2009 11:59 PM | Show all posts

Balas #292 lily_kama\ catat

kikikikikik.................jgn mara ah..........


kita kan mempunyai pendapat yg berbeza......


sepatut nya lu tgk siapa author tu.....


kan author tu nokia...........:@


hanpon la tu!!!!!!!!!
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Post time 8-1-2009 12:02 AM | Show all posts

Reply #293 donbotak's post

mana de kat situ tulih sape author.. :@
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Post time 8-1-2009 12:06 AM | Show all posts

Balas #294 lily_kama\ catat

ada lah!!!!!!
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Post time 8-1-2009 12:07 AM | Show all posts

Reply #295 donbotak's post

cuba tunjuk kat wa......
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Post time 8-1-2009 09:15 AM | Show all posts
adehhh...sian AWAk.... boleh x kita jgn petikaikan AWAK....kita pertikaikan DIA...bagi wa dlm hal ni mayb DIA terlalu cepat bertindak..sedangkan AWAK tidak bersedia tuk menghadapi...DIA yang bersalah looo...
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Post time 8-1-2009 09:21 AM | Show all posts
Originally posted by otakotak at 7-1-2009 10:30 PM
wat eva la korg nih blur la wa........awka tuh bg wa manusia bodoh

AWAK tak bodoh tak perlulah kita sakiti hati AWAK....puitis tu ttg DIA...tentang DIA yang TEWAS dalam melakukan sesuatu...tentang DIA yang terlalu cepat membuat keputusan...tentang DIA yang ego dengan maruah sendiri..tentang jiwa n hati DIA yang hancur n MATI kerna penolakkan...puitis itu mmg untuk DIA...kebodohan DIA..
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Post time 8-1-2009 09:27 AM | Show all posts
Originally posted by lily_kama at 7-1-2009 11:46 PM


'awak' tu agak kejam...

x reti nak menyelami hati si pemuitis..

atau sengaja membiarkan si pemuitis...

'awak' tu ego...

bangga dgn keegoaan yg dimilikinya...

setiap manusia ada EGO....terutama DIA...hatinya kuat but terasa pedih pabila diperlakukan begitu...hanya DIA sahaja yg faham apa itu kesakitan ketika itu...apa itu malu ketika itu...bodohkan....

AWAK pula mayb x menjangkakan sume tu berlaku...AWAK ada sbb sendiri untuk menolak DIA...dan oleh itu AWAK kerna menerima apa yang akan terjadi seterunya...mayb AWAK x nampak hati DIA...but hati DIA telah MATI...
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Post time 8-1-2009 09:27 AM | Show all posts
Originally posted by lily_kama at 7-1-2009 11:46 PM


ada story di sebalik 'awak'

jgn cpat buat spekulasi bodoh jugak

tuk tidak mengelirukan...wa akan tepek bebrapa puitis tuk korang paham citer sebeno
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