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Post time 31-7-2006 10:12 PM | Show all posts
To  you (when I go)

You know when I go away
I dont want you to worry
Because I have you in my heart
So we actually don抰 part
I hope you know that my sweetheart



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Post time 31-7-2006 10:13 PM | Show all posts
Originally posted by BingkaUbi at 31-7-2006 10:02 PM




hi memories, mungkin betul jugak...  


hmm.......so citer lah, first love awak kat saya...........kenapa saya ingatkan awak pada dia?
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Post time 1-8-2006 08:57 AM | Show all posts
suka tgk korang berbalas puisi.....:bodek:

tp aku tak reti sgt nak bmadah pujangga ni...:kant:
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Post time 1-8-2006 10:15 AM | Show all posts
Originally posted by polaris_girlz at 1-8-2006 08:57 AM
suka tgk korang berbalas puisi.....:bodek:

tp aku tak reti sgt nak bmadah pujangga ni...:kant:


kita pun tak reti polaris, pasan jer lebih. kalau dewan bahasa tengok marah kut. hehe. :bgrin:

selamat pagi.
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Post time 1-8-2006 12:53 PM | Show all posts
Originally posted by memories at 31/7/2006 10:02 PM


hi polaris, puisi awak pun bagus. saya main taram jer.......hehe. joinlah sama.


marilah join polaris...meriahkan thread nih...
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Post time 1-8-2006 10:45 PM | Show all posts

Reply #409 BingkaUbi's post

love is too precious until i wont let anything to destroy that love...
fully taken care of...it's like a parcel written with 'handlle with care'...
if that person is aware of that and handle the love with fully care, it wont break off...
but sometimes people tend to forget and treat them bad....

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Post time 2-8-2006 09:36 AM | Show all posts
Telah sekian lama aku mgamati bait2 puisi disini...
Tersentuh hati tatkala ianya bkaitan dgn diriku..
Ingin aku jadi sepertimu...
Bijak menutur kata...mcipta puisi yg begitu indah..
Lahir dari jiwa mu yg pernuh Kejujuran..
Teringin sungguh dihati ini..
Utk mcipta puisi nukilan sendiri...
Namun apakan daya..
diri ini tak sehebat dirimu...
Tolonglah...
Ajarkan aku BerPUISI...:tq:
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Post time 2-8-2006 12:18 PM | Show all posts
Originally posted by memories at 31-7-2006 10:13 PM


hmm.......so citer lah, first love awak kat saya...........kenapa saya ingatkan awak pada dia?




citer di sini?panjang memories......buhsan nnt org baca....

True Love has no sad or happy ending......because True Love never ends..:love:
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Post time 2-8-2006 12:19 PM | Show all posts
Originally posted by dewberry at 1-8-2006 12:53 PM


marilah join polaris...meriahkan thread nih...




hi dew.......
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Post time 2-8-2006 12:19 PM | Show all posts
Originally posted by sunnylife at 1-8-2006 10:45 PM
love is too precious until i wont let anything to destroy that love...
fully taken care of...it's like a parcel written with 'handlle with care'...
if that person is aware of that and handle the  ...


hi sunny

You can fall in love or out of love, depending on the way things go. But falling in love is the best feeling there is. It doesnt bore me and Id do it again and again if I have to. good luck.
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Post time 2-8-2006 12:21 PM | Show all posts
Originally posted by sunnylife at 1-8-2006 10:45 PM
love is too precious until i wont let anything to destroy that love...
fully taken care of...it's like a parcel written with 'handlle with care'...
if that person is aware of that and handle the  ...



someone treat u bad ka sunny?
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Post time 2-8-2006 12:22 PM | Show all posts
Originally posted by BingkaUbi at 2-8-2006 12:18 PM




citer di sini?panjang memories......buhsan nnt org baca....

True Love has no sad or happy ending......because True Love never ends..:love:


hi bingka, ader ya?

Ada kisah cinta panjang, kita buat movies jer lah?

true love never end? well, it depends. all the time you'd think  that its true love, then when it ended you realize it was craps..........hehe, gurau jer, saja merapu.
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Post time 2-8-2006 12:24 PM | Show all posts
Originally posted by polaris_girlz at 2-8-2006 09:36 AM
Telah sekian lama aku mgamati bait2 puisi disini...
Tersentuh hati tatkala ianya bkaitan dgn diriku..
Ingin aku jadi sepertimu...
Bijak menutur kata...mcipta puisi yg begitu indah..
Lahir dari  ...




Talent or Learn?
Saya tak pasti Polaris..
Puisi sekadar luahan rasa
kadang kala tak mampu nak diluahkan secara zahir
tetapi begitu indah disampaikan melalui nukilan
dari mata pena yang lagi tajam dari mata pedang.... << baris akhir ni saya pinjam dari memories
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Post time 2-8-2006 12:24 PM | Show all posts
Originally posted by polaris_girlz at 2-8-2006 09:36 AM
Telah sekian lama aku mgamati bait2 puisi disini...
Tersentuh hati tatkala ianya bkaitan dgn diriku..
Ingin aku jadi sepertimu...
Bijak menutur kata...mcipta puisi yg begitu indah..
Lahir dari  ...



hi polaris, suh bingka ajar :ah: dia terrer.
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Post time 2-8-2006 12:25 PM | Show all posts
Originally posted by BingkaUbi at 2-8-2006 12:24 PM




Talent or Learn?
Saya tak pasti Polaris..
Puisi sekadar luahan rasa
kadang kala tak mampu nak diluahkan secara zahir
tetapi begitu indah disampaikan melalui nukilan
dari mata pena yang ...


eleh, bingka konon nak merendah diri lah tu. macam lah orang percaya lol
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Post time 2-8-2006 12:30 PM | Show all posts
Originally posted by memories at 2-8-2006 12:22 PM


hi bingka, ader ya?

Ada kisah cinta panjang, kita buat movies jer lah?

true love never end? well, it depends. all the time you'd think  that its true love, then when it ended you realize ...




kalu buat movies, siapa nak jadi director?
hehehehe...

bukan ka dulu awak pernah kata pasal cinta Laila & Majnun, ttg Romeo & Juliet?  :nerd:
&  saya tambah satu lagi, Jack & siapa tuh dalam cerita Titanic? hehehehe.....
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Post time 2-8-2006 12:31 PM | Show all posts
Originally posted by memories at 2-8-2006 12:25 PM


eleh, bingka konon nak merendah diri lah tu. macam lah orang percaya lol



hehehehe....saya rasa Dew lagi terrer....
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Post time 2-8-2006 12:34 PM | Show all posts
Originally posted by BingkaUbi at 2-8-2006 12:30 PM




kalu buat movies, siapa nak jadi director?
hehehehe...

bukan ka dulu awak pernah kata pasal cinta Laila & Majnun, ttg Romeo & Juliet?  :nerd:
&  saya tambah satu lagi, Jac ...


saya leh jadi direktor, saya pandai cakap 'cut'!!

saya leh jadi heroin gak pasal saya cun.....muahahaha.

Jack and the beanstalk?
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Post time 2-8-2006 12:35 PM | Show all posts
Originally posted by BingkaUbi at 2-8-2006 12:31 PM



hehehehe....saya rasa Dew lagi terrer....


hmm....kalau awak kata saya terrer apa salahnya? selalunya kalau orang puji, kita puji orang tu balik. saya fishing, awak tak ambik bait pun. :bgrin:
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Post time 2-8-2006 01:16 PM | Show all posts
Originally posted by memories at 2/8/2006 12:34 PM


saya leh jadi direktor, saya pandai cakap 'cut'!!

saya leh jadi heroin gak pasal saya cun.....muahahaha.

Jack and the beanstalk?


bukan la mem..JACK n ROSE DAWSON...hehehe..."u jump i jump remember?" hehehe...

bingka...u lagi hebat ar bingka...i ni skadar bertinta pena di pinggiran aje...hehehehe...

polaris...x kisah ar...jd sajak ke jd gurindam ke...onn je...hehehehe..
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