All the wonders of you....

truly · Post time 1-4-2012 11:43 AM

Always something there. Enjoy!

obelisk · Post time 2-4-2012 09:19 AM

truly Post at 20-3-2012 19:05

hehehe nak cari jalan masuk ke tuu

obelisk · Post time 2-4-2012 09:24 AM

Always something there. Enjoy!
truly Post at 1-4-2012 11:43

nice song..

Neil Sedaka - The Hungry years

Girl we made it to the top
We went so high we couldn't stop
We climbed the ladder leading us nowhere
Two of us together
Building castles in the air

We spun so fast we couldn't tell
The gold ring from the carousel
How could we know the ride would turn out bad
Everything we wanted
Was everything we had

I miss the hungry years
The once upon a time
The lovely long ago
We didn't have a dime
Those days of me and you
We lost along the way

How could I be so blind
Not to see the door
Closing on the world
I now hunger for
Looking through my tears
I miss the hungry years

We shared our daydreams one by one
Making plans was so much fun
We set our goals and reached the highest star
The things that we were after
Were much better from afar

Here we stand just me and you
With everything and nothing, too
It wasn't worth the price we had to pay
Honey take me home
Let's go back to yesterday

I miss the hungry years
The once upon a time
The lovely long ago
We didn't have a dime
Those days of me and you
We lost along the way

How could I be so blind
Not to see the door
Closing on the world
I know hunger for
Looking through my tears
I miss the hungry years
I miss the hungry years

truly · Post time 2-4-2012 09:59 AM

hehehe nak cari jalan masuk ke tuu
obelisk Post at 2-4-2012 09:19

tak, dia nak turun. Tengok yang ni, dah nampak tempat nak pijak tanah hehehe. Bijak sungguh dorang ni, macam anak orang.

truly · Post time 2-4-2012 10:01 AM

nice song..

Neil Sedaka - The Hungry years

Girl we made it to the top
We went so high ...
obelisk Post at 2-4-2012 09:24

Thanks for the song. lembut saja lagu ni and very meaningful...percaya atau tidak first time jugak I dengar. apasal banyak sangat lagu I ketinggalan hehe. But I know Neil Sedaka has good songs.

ronin · Post time 2-4-2012 12:54 PM

Hehe thanks for the compliment...you compose la lagi. yours was good hari tu.

ps: tengok lagu ...
truly Post at 16-3-2012 09:39

Hari tu nak write something....tapi ilham tu tersangkut pulak.....

ronin · Post time 2-4-2012 01:00 PM

Merciless needles on flesh of you and I

Bearing emptiness we both deny

truly Post at 20-3-2012 09:55

I couldn't quite grasp the meaning of the above.....were u both high on something?

truly · Post time 3-4-2012 09:13 AM

Hari tu nak write something....tapi ilham tu tersangkut pulak.....
ronin Post at 2-4-2012 12:54

tersangkut kat mana?

hehe ilham datang dari mana, dari mata turun ke pc ke?

truly · Post time 3-4-2012 09:15 AM

I couldn't quite grasp the meaning of the above.....were u both high on something?
ronin Post at 2-4-2012 13:00

Hahahaha very funny!!

No, we were not both high on drugs if that what you are saying.

I wanted to say hati berdarah di tusuk sembilu hahaha so in english I thought I could put needles. Yang menyucuk nyucuk jiwa kami sampai berdarah.

tak baik tau you ni, kiter tak suker.

truly · Post time 3-4-2012 09:31 AM

Satu ketika dikota itu

Perlukah aku berkata
Ketika senja berlabuh
dan burung terbang pulang ke sarang
Tatkala kita sama sama menyusuri persisiran itu
Berpegangan tangan
Melihat pelbagai kapal layar kecil dan besar
Menyeberangi sungai
yang menyatukan dua belah kota.

Degup jantungku
dan erat pelukanmu
Malam semalam itu
Sudah cukup menyatukan hati kita
Membalut ruang luka
dan menyanyi nada cinta

Maka perlukah aku ucapkan lagi
Atau cukup sekadar kita sama sama mengerti?

ronin · Post time 3-4-2012 06:28 PM

tersangkut kat mana? hehe ilham datang dari mana, dari mata turun ke pc ke?
truly Post at 3-4-2012 09:13

ilham turun dari penjuru mata turun ke hujung jari.....tapi menjadi kaku bila memegang keyboard....

ronin · Post time 3-4-2012 06:43 PM

I wanted to say hati berdarah di tusuk sembilu hahaha so in english I thought I could put needles. Yang menyucuk nyucuk jiwa kami sampai berdarah.
truly Post at 3-4-2012 09:15

maybe...... "My heart bleeds by piercing of a splinter".......that's what I could think of lah....

I was thinking about this, and then I remember a song from Linda Ronstadt...an old song but was my favorite in the 80s....Lagu Silver threads and golden needles....bait2 liriknya termasuk:

"Silver threads and golden needles cannot mend this heart of mine"
The heart hurts badly and no amount of mending can heals the wound....

ronin · Post time 3-4-2012 06:58 PM

Post Last Edit by ronin at 4-4-2012 10:34

Satu ketika dikota itu

Perlukah aku berkata
Ketika senja berlabuh
dan burung terbang pulang ke ...
truly Post at 3-4-2012 09:31

puitis.....very nice....i suka kalau perasaan penulis dikaitkan dengan keadaan persekitaran yg melakonli....spt senja berlabuh, burung pulang ke sarang dsbnya....sebab perkara2 itu kita boleh bayangkan suasananya .....

sajak2 melayu ni i suka gaya spt yg ditulis oleh usman awang dan latif mohidin....kalau usman awang one of my favorites is 'duri dan api'; while latif mohidin 'sungai mekong'......'sungai mekong' ni jadi modal dlm my karangan BM semasa mce dulu....

Sungai Mekong

kupilih namamu

kerana aku begitu sepi

kan kubenamkan dadaku

ke dadamu

kaki kananku ke bulan

kaki kiriku ke matahari

kan kuhanyutkan hatiku

ke kalimu

namaku ke muara

suaraku ke gunung.

.

2

Sungai Mekong

nafasmu begitu tenang

lenggangmu begitu lapang

di tebingmu

ada ibu bersuara sayu

mencari suara puteranya yang hilang

waktu ia merebahkan wajahnya

ke wajahmu

kau masih bisa senyum senang.

.

3

Sungai Mekong

akhirilah tari siang riakmu

kulihat di dasarmu

kuntum-kuntuman berdarah

batu-batu luka

malam ini

ribut dari utara akan tiba

tebingmu akan pecah

airmu akan merah

dan arusmu akan lebih keras

dari Niagara

.

Vientienne

1 Februari 1966

ronin · Post time 3-4-2012 07:21 PM

Post Last Edit by ronin at 3-4-2012 19:36

Bila tengok filem Bunohan lakonan Faizal Hussein terlintas dlm fikiran sajak pendek berikut....

Satu Pembunuhan

Cukup,
tutup mulutmu.
Wahai, darah mu terlalu manis!
Puncaknya jadi idaman,
satu pembunuhan!

Bikin apa
bila semua tidak kena
bukan kerana tidak betul...

Ayah.... darahku sedang mendesak...
mencari satu perhitungan
kepada satu pembunuhan...
yang kaku, bisu dan kejam!

truly · Post time 5-4-2012 04:30 PM

maybe...... "My heart bleeds by piercing of a splinter".......that's what I could think of lah.. ...
ronin Post at 3-4-2012 18:43

"My heart bleeds by piercing of a splinter" thats a good one. rasa meruntun jiwa membacanya hehe. Boleh terasa sakit tu. Nanti I gunakan untuk my next poem hehe.

Sedap jugak lagu ni. Pun I tak pernah dengar. Aper la hehe. Thanks for sharing. Now best pulak masuk thread ni, boleh santai dan dengar lagu lagu yang kita semua suka.

truly · Post time 5-4-2012 04:32 PM

puitis.....very nice....i suka kalau perasaan penulis dikaitkan dengan keadaan persekitaran yg m ...
ronin Post at 3-4-2012 18:58

Thanks for the kind words

I pun suka jugak kadang puisi santai macam ni, mudah di tulis jika di kaitkan dengan kenangan. Kita hanya perlu bawa diri kita menyusuri balik tempat tu.

Puisi melayu I tak pandai sangat, but I know a few names. Sg Mekong ni is a nice one. You guna dalam karangan you untuk analyse ke?

truly · Post time 5-4-2012 04:34 PM

Bila tengok filem Bunohan lakonan Faizal Hussein terlintas dlm fikiran sajak pendek berikut....

S ...
ronin Post at 3-4-2012 19:21

brutalnya sajak hehe. Very nice. But I hope you are not brutal like this?

So you dah tengok bunohan? I thought it was a murder movie but apparently its a name of a place?

i hope to watch it too, one day bila masuk tv hehehe.

Pandai jugak pelakon dia menjiwai watak kan, its quite a good quality movie from the look of it.

truly · Post time 5-4-2012 04:42 PM

ronin · Post time 5-4-2012 05:11 PM

"My heart bleeds by piercing of a splinter" thats a good one. rasa meruntun jiwa membacanya hehe ...
truly Post at 5-4-2012 16:30

my heart bleeds like a splinter so deep...
piercing into the wall of the vein
blood oozing with agony of pain
my hope falls down into the drain
looking for a better tomorrow in vain
hope diminishing and future in taint
I wonder if there's anything more to gain
Please god make me sane
I'm an ordinary guy and not a saint
......blah blah blah......

tak tahu nak sambung mcm mana....heh..heh...

ronin · Post time 5-4-2012 05:22 PM

Post Last Edit by ronin at 5-4-2012 17:39

Puisi melayu I tak pandai sangat, but I know a few names. Sg Mekong ni is a nice one. You guna dalam karangan you untuk analyse ke?
truly Post at 5-4-2012 16:32

adalah tajuk dlm karangan tu ttg filem yg pernah tgk dan bagaimana filem itu memberi kesan pada diri sendiri.....so i karanglah ttg filem 'the deer hunter' yg i tengok dan tentang kekejaman dan kesan perang Vietnam yg menyebabkan ramai terkorban....kebetulan i pernah terbaca sajak 'sungai mekong' tu....jadi i selitkan sikit bait2nya sebagai penguat point2 i....so sajak sungai mekong ni sebenarnya menceritakan ttg penaklukkan askar vietnam utara terhadap vietnam selatan yg dibantu oleh Amerika....sebab tu dlm baitnya ada sebut 'ribut dari utara'.......iaitu serangan dari utara yang menyebabkan banyak pertumpahan darah.....

peratikan bait yg kat bawah, yg ni I selitkan dlm karangan little or less:

3

Sungai Mekong

akhirilah tari siang riakmu

kulihat di dasarmu

kuntum-kuntuman berdarah

batu-batu luka

malam ini

ribut dari utara akan tiba

tebingmu akan pecah

airmu akan merah

dan arusmu akan lebih keras