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aydeniv replied at 11-3-2018 02:29 PM
hi... saya baru kt sini...
ape yg i like you ya? kene buat cerita ker kt sini?
buat la citer do u like me lak
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hahaha..... kelakar....
klu nak kene buat cerita, tak reti la nak mengarang... bm karangan lulus cukup makan jer dulu2... 
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aydeniv replied at 11-3-2018 06:18 PM
hahaha..... kelakar....
klu nak kene buat cerita, tak reti la nak mengarang... bm karangan lulu ...
owh guna je ayat yg u duk guna sekarang
bukan susah pun macam kacang je
register cari lagi susah tau |
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kene buat cerita genre mcm mana?
aydeniv start dgn onexox la... ni kira babak 1 dah ni...
hehehe
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aydeniv replied at 11-3-2018 06:49 PM
kene buat cerita genre mcm mana?
aydeniv start dgn onexox la... ni kira babak 1 dah ni...
owh kalau tanya ai suka macam hindustan tu
hero sehensem shah rukh khan
heroin secantik kajol
lagu seindah siulan biola
scenematography selawa saujana mata memandang
cuma create story board je
jumpa kat mana
dalam forum cari dan terjatuh cinta kah
dalam airport masa menunggu kah
masa kat lrt terlanggar masa beli tiket kah
atau masa dalam telefon ketika tersalah dail kah |
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owhhh...mcm tu eh... okies... aydeniv try...hahaha
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aydeniv replied at 11-3-2018 09:00 PM
owhhh...mcm tu eh... okies... aydeniv try...hahaha
try jangan tak try apply jugak 5w 1h |
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kelas tuisyen matematik baru start....
cikgu safura mula menulis di white board... tiba2 pintu kelas dibuka...
dia muncul di balik pintu dalam keadaan selamber bercampur gelissah... maybe sebab cikgu dah mula kelas and dia tahu dia lambat.... aku pula bila tengok dia terus aku rasa something...
cinta pandang pertama i guess... and itu starting point aku suka dia... |
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Edited by onexox97 at 11-3-2018 11:25 PM
aydeniv replied at 11-3-2018 10:01 PM
ape 5w 1h ?
how
what
when
why
which
whose
where
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tapi kena cerita benar, ie life experience.
contoh mcm dlm citer asal yg bawak title ''I Like You'' ni, it was a real-life experience.
ie it was told ''as-is'', ie the way it really happened.
''I Like You'' melambangkan the author tidak berminat utk berlebih2 dari apa yg di-encounter, jadi tiada follow-up dilakukan eg whatsapp ke, messenger ke, ig ke etc. ie tidak membawa kepada I Fancy U ke, I Want To Know You More ke, jaug sekali I Love You ke
so, please begin aydeniv.. we would like to hear your story
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wah wah.. new experience ye adila?
haaa, so ni mcm open to suggestion of where it will take you in the future lah ye?
escapism? ye boleh jadi from reading in between the lines.. infatuation maybe jugak.. new experience pon maybe jugak, kan?
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ipes2 replied at 12-3-2018 12:18 AM
excellent onex!
ye ke doc
betul ke tu
ingat2 lupa la |
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ipes2 replied at 11-3-2018 04:26 PM
wah wah.. new experience ye adila?
haaa, so ni mcm open to suggestion of where it will take you i ...
iyela kot doc.. xtau la. i rasa dedua notty tp xberapa nk pandai bernotty. I pulak jenis sentimental sikit...seronok tu ya tp mcm xtaula bendalah ni real ke idak. But yes i like u too.. untuk jwb dia klu dia tanya do u like me. Kalau dia tanyalah...huhuhuhu
klu infatuation mesti ada laid eyes ke bahu bergesel ke...klu escapism mesti i sgt dekat dgn dia tp tak...but he is warm and sweet je which i like. Our character agak similar in a way but he is better than me la..again, pepagi ni i teringat kat dia pulak dah.. |
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owhhh... tak kisah suka apa2 pun ya? ker suka pada org jer?
ni 1 kisah...
aku menhirup coffee panas sementara menunggu waktu utk boarding.
aku memandang di skrin flight information, waktu utk flight ke kota kinabalu menunjukan jam 20.30.
di sebelah kanan ku, selang beberapa seaat, ku pandang dia bersahaja...
dia sedang kusyuk menatap handphone.. maybe tengah tgk fb or ig... or maybe baca artikel..
10 minit berlalu, tiba waktu utk boarding telah di umum... aku bergerak ke gate...
dapat tempat duduk tepi tingkap... best sgt... ralit aku tgk di luar tingkap.. kemudian aku lihat penumpang yg duduk selang 1 seat di sebelah kanan ku.. eh, dia la.. yg td aku tgk semasa menunggu utk boarding...aku suka tgk wajahnya... dia memandang aku dgn memberi senyuman..
aku balas dgn senyuman semula... kemudian kami masing2 membuat urusan sendiri.. kami tidak bercakap spanjang perjalanan...
aku pula tidur.. aku mmg pantang naik flight jer, mesti tdo.. hehehe..
tiba di airport kk, kami masih bertemu sehingga mengambil beg... setelah itu, aku lihat dia bergerak ke arah berlainan dgn aku...
saat itu, aku berkenan dgn dia.. aku suka dia.. raut wajah yg tenang dan tersenyum...
aku senyum sendiri... dan menaiki teksi utk ke hotel..
the end....
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hehehe... i just citer jer apa yg biasa...
since temanya suka tanpa ada continues kan....
kiranya suka without heart feeling ni senang jer... kadang2 suka sebab character org...
suka dgn promoter, or pilot, or tudm, tldm..hahaha
suka dgn artis pun ada...hahaha
suka tanpa heart feeling ni, i ok jer...
klu suka dgn heart feeling, ni susah sgt2.... i susah sket nak suka heart feeling... 
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i like you
when u try to do what i asked and when u dont try hard to pleased me
i like you
when u sang to me
though the melody is out
i like you
when i think of you
i feel like theres a butterflies in my chest
well we never really shaken hands or hugs yet but I LIKE U so very much!
Lrt
Subang heading office
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 sweet story.. sibbaik tak borak2 ye
out station merbahaya.
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Post time 11-3-2018 05:52 PM
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