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Author: KILL_NANCY

[Pelbagai] [Sajak]Perspektif Dalam Bahan Bacaan

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 Author| Post time 11-12-2018 01:03 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
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 Author| Post time 11-12-2018 01:04 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
ip_lepat replied at 11-12-2018 01:01 PM
ayat pyanhabib kan.. faham2 je le sendiri

ada masa aku tepek yg lain

beliau ni romantik orangnya bang lepat.

penuh kesyahduan puisi2nya.
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Post time 11-12-2018 01:12 PM | Show all posts
KILL_NANCY replied at 11-12-2018 01:04 PM
beliau ni romantik orangnya bang lepat.

penuh kesyahduan puisi2nya.

ni antara yg paling best selain blues i, layar & dan tiba tiba saja


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Post time 11-12-2018 01:13 PM | Show all posts
Saya pilih yg kedua.. Straight forward. Lg pun i bkn jenis suka berkias-kias. Tak suka i ckp x suka. Jenis fakta.. A or B. Keje i pun jenis gitu, A or B. Kena firm. So, kalau sapa2 bg ayat kiasan, lmbt la sikit nk paham..

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Post time 11-12-2018 03:03 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
KILL_NANCY replied at 11-12-2018 01:03 PM
@salmon-suki

Wahhh..thankssss tt seru kite.
Urmmm..sajak ni sy kureng sket sbb bahasa dia kdg2 terlalu sukar difahami..hahahha
Walaupun penah study tp semua dah lupe sbb sy bkn sejenis y puitis..hihihi

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Post time 11-12-2018 03:15 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
seribulan replied at 11-12-2018 11:56 AM
Kalah Sasterawan Negara lah awak Anon @ KILL_NANCY...

Sila terbitkan ;p

cik seri tolong pujuk dia sama..rugi je menulis simpan dalam fon


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Post time 11-12-2018 03:17 PM | Show all posts
MeghanK replied at 11-12-2018 02:15 PM
cik seri tolong pujuk dia sama..rugi je menulis simpan dalam fon

Kalau 40 orang sebut...masin mulut...kena tag 40 orang ni
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Post time 11-12-2018 03:18 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
salmon-suki replied at 11-12-2018 03:03 PM
Wahhh..thankssss tt seru kite.
Urmmm..sajak ni sy kureng sket sbb bahasa dia kdg2 terlalu sukar  ...

Wahhh...dpt tacang!! Thankssss momod @seribulan bg tacang sempena hujan2 ni..hihi
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Post time 11-12-2018 03:19 PM | Show all posts
salmon-suki replied at 11-12-2018 02:18 PM
Wahhh...dpt tacang!! Thankssss momod @seribulan bg tacang sempena hujan2 ni..hihi

Ada poin ada bonus
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Post time 11-12-2018 04:27 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
Antara 2 sajak tu, saya lebih suka karya tongkat warrant tu. Sy tak pandai bersastera sangat.
Jadi, sy lebih suka yg straight forward, tp masih menggunakan perkataan perkataan yg tersusun molek.


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Post time 11-12-2018 04:52 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
ip_lepat replied at 11-12-2018 12:40 PM
paling suka yg ni



Wow, sajak tentang cinta
Berdebar debar rasa masa membacanya
Hahhhaah

Harap2, sajak tu ditulis oleh suami kepada isteri, bukan oleh boyfriend pada girlfriendnya.

Sy selalu berangan, suami tulis sajak cinta, tapi, angan2 je lah. Saya terima suami seadanya sebagaimana dia terima saya seadanya.

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Post time 11-12-2018 05:01 PM | Show all posts

need some thinking before responding. nanti eh, bila fox dah abis exam

thanks nancy for tagging me and mat
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Post time 11-12-2018 05:12 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
Nurul8001 replied at 11-12-2018 04:52 PM
Wow, sajak tentang cinta
Berdebar debar rasa masa membacanya
Hahhhaah

Tulis gini pun dpt 20?
Mod bod sini memang pemurah.

Terima kasih:-)
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Post time 11-12-2018 05:43 PM | Show all posts
Nurul8001 replied at 11-12-2018 04:52 PM
Wow, sajak tentang cinta
Berdebar debar rasa masa membacanya
Hahhhaah
Saya terima suami seadanya sebagaimana dia terima saya seadanya.
itu yg paling baik. masing2 jgn lupa diri, jgn berangan2 terlalu tinggi
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Post time 11-12-2018 07:59 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
seribulan replied at 11-12-2018 03:19 PM
Ada poin ada bonus

Hihi..mekasehhhh bebanyakkk momod!
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Post time 11-12-2018 08:01 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
Sy pernah sekali je bt puisi or sajak ni tp lebih kpd moden puisi laa..cumanya lps aje lappy bt hal,terus hilang one and only karya sy tu..
Kalau tak,bleh tepek kat sini..time tu je dpt ilham..lps y tu terus dah xde..haha

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Post time 11-12-2018 08:53 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
KILL_NANCY replied at 11-12-2018 12:44 PM
thanks meisapoya.haha.amboi.super saiya ke 4.

Iya. Kalau x faham, memang akan jadi marah.

Tapi, pilihan kedua tu meresap ke jiwa juga walau sajak tu level komsas spm. Senang nak faham dan ada juga seni nya kan.

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 Author| Post time 11-12-2018 09:30 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
ip_lepat replied at 11-12-2018 01:12 PM
ni antara yg paling best selain blues i, layar & dan tiba tiba saja

ni pernah baca bang lepat.masih segar diingatan puisi ni dilampirkan di dalam artikel ujang dulu.ya kalau tak silap saya.
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 Author| Post time 11-12-2018 09:32 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
Nurul8001 replied at 11-12-2018 04:27 PM
Antara 2 sajak tu, saya lebih suka karya tongkat warrant tu. Sy tak pandai bersastera sangat.
Jadi ...

terima kasih nurul berikan pandangan di sini.
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 Author| Post time 11-12-2018 09:33 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
Foxey replied at 11-12-2018 05:01 PM
need some thinking before responding. nanti eh, bila fox dah abis exam

thanks nancy for taggin ...

no problem.bila2 je foxey.
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