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RAINY NIGHT ON A CRAMPED BUS

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Post time 20-10-2019 11:27 PM | Show all posts |Read mode
Bila awal malam
Dan hujan mula datang
Dan workers yang penat keluar ke jalan jalan
Mencari jalan pulang

In the buses, hot breath steams up cold windows
Those sitting, feel lucky they get to rest weary feet
And those standing, they let their guards down
Allowing personal spaces invasion
No autonomy no privacy
Steamed up windows and standing fellow weary travellers
Each wonders where the other is heading to..
..or what his or her day was like
A tired girl with weary eyes
Resting her head with a faint smile on the shoulder
Of her weary-eyed beau

Rainy nights
On a full cramped bus
Tidak miserable malah indah dan ingin aku kembali kepada nye


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Post time 21-10-2019 09:36 AM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
To that tired girl, with weary eyes...
Smell the rain
Life is full of beauty, notice it and notice the bumble bee
with d smiling faces, smell d rain and feel d wind, live ur life girl and chase ur dreams

Rain, will be good spent at home with cup of coffee and reminisce the good thoughts.

Those days, balik kelas naik bus la. I saw one young guy macam johny depp version malaysia.. we took the same bus. Weeks, months... never speak to each other. He noticed me and so do i, our eyes met but never said hello. One day, he sat behind me. My heart beats so fast. I wish I have the courage to say hello or what ever i could at that moment. Never did. That will be my last journey with d same bus. I tried and bit mt mouth to speak but mind goes blank,  mouth shut sealed.. although my heart beats poetris.. i didn't take d chance.
after 30 years.. i still remember his face. A random feelings.. so i do like taking the bus. Perhaps one day.. while the rain pouring down I shall take the bus and enjoy the journey.

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Post time 21-10-2019 10:25 AM | Show all posts
Reading this made me sad
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Post time 21-10-2019 01:11 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
Rindunya naik bas
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Post time 21-10-2019 05:33 PM | Show all posts
Edited by Genkidesuka at 21-10-2019 05:35 PM

Assalammu'alaikum n selamat sejahtera.

Akak belum dpt chance lagi nak duduk atas bas n letak kepala on my beau's shoulder.  Dulu tmpt kerja dia dekat dgn rumah, 10 minit dah sampai;  while mine was far - 2 jam pergi, 2 jam balik.  Standard la balik naik bas tu mesti kat luar dah gelap.   

Kita semua tahu la kan, dulu kalau balik mlm2 pun bas tak pernah tak crowded (tak tahu sekarang mcm mana).   Akak suka tgk ke luar especially through the bus windscreen, acah2 jd bus driver.  Akak tgk jln, tgk sign board, tgk cara bus driver tu tukar gear.  Kalau dpt duduk mmg rasa nak berangan tu tinggi especially time hujan... So there were nights like I was living the romcom eg:  I'M AUDREY HEPBURN from ROMAN HOLIDAY tonight... yes, I was a run-away princess.  Other nights, I'M MEG RYAN from YOU'VE GOT MAIL.  The difference was that I was on a bus and I didn't see a butterfly getting off n headed to Bloomingdales to buy a hat.   I only saw moths n some other kind of insects trapped dlm lampu dlm bus.  Tp selalunya sekejap je la berangan tu sbb org sebelah ajak borak or ada bauan yg kurang menyenangkan which managed to meresap ke seluruh bas or I saw a big roach melintas kat bwh seat.   Yg last tu mmg buat akak saspen gila.  

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Post time 21-10-2019 05:40 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
Genkidesuka replied at 21-10-2019 09:33 AM
Assalammu'alaikum n selamat sejahtera.

Akak belum dpt chance lagi nak duduk atas bas n letak kepa ...

i can feel u kakak... exactly the same. Masa naik bus.. gitulah minda melayang layang.. melankolia with all the beautiful memories and all the excitement we wish we could be. Hope u are well tho.
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Post time 21-10-2019 05:51 PM | Show all posts
adila39 replied at 21-10-2019 05:40 PM
i can feel u kakak... exactly the same. Masa naik bus.. gitulah minda melayang layang.. melankolia ...

I am fine, Alhamdulillah.  Hope u r fine too, adila.   
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Post time 21-10-2019 09:07 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
I'm claustrophobic could no longer sit on a train or bus. I'll eat something bland or something expensive as long as no need to Q for food
I got plenty of old clothes but on occasions it will be designer's
Most of the time I'm cashless, every single time Im busy with online transactions
I hired cargo transporters but never touched a single merchandise
Very lonely out here wading through unpaved roads

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 Author| Post time 25-10-2019 05:08 PM | Show all posts
adila39 replied at 21-10-2019 09:36 AM
To that tired girl, with weary eyes...
Smell the rain
Life is full of beauty, notice it and notice ...

you should have said hi
especially that one last day

dont worry
nothing menggatal or nothing sexual or nothing yg membawa kemana-mana
just a pleasant hi to another person
who shares our experience for that day
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 Author| Post time 25-10-2019 05:09 PM | Show all posts

rainy dark tiring day is a blue day for many
rainy in generally is gloomy

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Post time 25-10-2019 05:27 PM | Show all posts
jiwo la set dio.....

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 Author| Post time 25-10-2019 05:28 PM | Show all posts

oh do
do go again
every trip is different
i suka rainy days
di kelantan masa kecik, mcm happy moments occured on rainy monsoon days

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 Author| Post time 25-10-2019 05:35 PM | Show all posts
Genkidesuka replied at 21-10-2019 05:33 PM
Assalammu'alaikum n selamat sejahtera.

Akak belum dpt chance lagi nak duduk atas bas n letak kepa ...

sy slalu pandang kuar tingkap. if berdiri, algi suka, boleh tgk semua org. kekadang ada bas panjang. yg boleh belok2 tu. yg mcm 2 bas bersambung. lagi ramai org. jika hujan, lagi miserable. lagi saya suka . if long distance bus eg pasir mas-KL, sgt menarik jika duduk sebelah awek. boleh borak. now org naik plane. sy naik bas now ni slalu dok sorang je. takde doh kenangan borak dlm bas 8 - 10hrs.
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 Author| Post time 25-10-2019 05:36 PM | Show all posts

meme geng geng jiwo ha ha
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 Author| Post time 25-10-2019 05:38 PM | Show all posts
KIM.K replied at 21-10-2019 09:07 PM
I'm claustrophobic could no longer sit on a train or bus. I'll eat something bland or something expe ...

wah, sy nak off-topic sikit: merchandise apakah yg kim.k importing (or exporting). clothes kah? if so then good business. unpaved roads? i wonder where u r
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Post time 25-10-2019 05:47 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
ipes2 replied at 25-10-2019 05:28 PM
oh do
do go again
every trip is different

Musim tengkujuh dah ni Dr
Kami main air bah
Dulu bila hujan banjir akan melanda hutan tu syok nya
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Post time 25-10-2019 05:50 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
ipes2 replied at 25-10-2019 09:08 AM
you should have said hi
especially that one last day


Rain is not only a drops of water to earth, but d love of sky to earth. Never met each other but they complete each other.

hmm sgt muda masa tu.. jeling jeling je. yeah xde yg harmful pun. Naik bus ur mind akan go wild to every moment yg u wish u can have.

Tapi ada incident zaman sekolah budak lelaki ni jahat gaduh dlm bus and sorang tu jatuh atas riba sy. Love at first sight kata dia. Dia la sy x. So tiap kali naik bus kena ngurat.. sampai x naik bus dah.. hehehehe
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Post time 26-10-2019 02:33 AM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
Thread feeling feeling good...

Ha ha ha
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Post time 26-10-2019 10:58 AM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
ipes2 replied at 25-10-2019 05:09 PM
rainy dark tiring day is a blue day for many
rainy in generally is gloomy

Nenek jiran sebelah aku berkata, " biar hujan lebat bagaimanapun, ianya nampak didepan dimata, tapi kalau hujan didalam hati?"

Kau nak jawab?

Huhuhuhu
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Post time 26-10-2019 11:02 AM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
adila39 replied at 21-10-2019 05:40 PM
i can feel u kakak... exactly the same. Masa naik bus.. gitulah minda melayang layang.. melankolia ...

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I feel you 2.

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