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[Bahasa] [Takwil Puisi 33] Two Sides of a Coin

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 Author| Post time 30-10-2019 09:08 AM | Show all posts
aleX-S replied at 30-10-2019 05:07 AM
Kakak nancyyyyyyy, diksi saya dalam ni senang cam budak darjah 3U jer, doesn't even have a syntax  ...

Saya pilih make way for my protege...mentor kena ngundur diri

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Post time 30-10-2019 09:16 AM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
aleX-S replied at 30-10-2019 06:52 AM
Bahasa level budak sekolah rendah je ni, ayuh kak burn cuba

Kihkihkih. Vocab kakokmu ini sungguh terhad dik. Haha nanti kakok bergigih ya
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Post time 30-10-2019 09:42 PM | Show all posts

Oh ambo tidok tau. Terima kasih, dulu ambo ingat KN pun tino, sekarang ambo raso jate.
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Post time 30-10-2019 09:47 PM | Show all posts
aleX-S replied at 30-10-2019 06:03 AM
It's a unisex name sis. Dekat dp, dia alex udinov dalam nikita

Materialistic? Guess everyone  ...

Thank you sis Alex for the explanation. Such nice poem you wrote, I dont think I'm able to decipher the meaning, but I'll try sometimes later I hope. When reading KN and yours poems, usually I feel that my so called poem cant compare haha yours are in a class of its own, true literacy.

Anyway, hope to read more of the same.

And yes you're right about being materialistic. Actually its even a necessity. I had just came back from a trip to Istanbul. Without materials  I wont be able to enjoy a vacation, to put it realisticly!
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Post time 30-10-2019 09:51 PM | Show all posts
KILL_NANCY replied at 30-10-2019 02:55 AM
two sides of a coin.each side is distinct.

sherlock mode ON.

From a sifu, with such detailed analysis, how can anyone else compete with this? Haha mod I suggest we ban KN from further involvement in thread like this lest people like me cannot cari makan!

In fact I'd like to put forward a motion that we disregard this post, and let us marhaen try instead.
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 Author| Post time 30-10-2019 10:01 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
nurrlisa replied at 30-10-2019 08:47 PM
Thank you sis Alex for the explanation. Such nice poem you wrote, I dont think I'm able to deciphe ...


Been to Turkey- seen Muhammad Al-Fateh castle...prayed at Rumi's tomb praying place just beside the Prophet's beard showcase...Attaturk tomb rites...picked cherry at its yard in Bursa...the Turkey beach and many more. with a handsome Turk guide..
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Post time 30-10-2019 10:06 PM | Show all posts
seribulan replied at 30-10-2019 10:01 PM
Been to Turkey- seen Muhammad Al-Fateh castle...prayed at Rumi's tomb praying place just beside  ...

That is very nice, thank you for sharing, I'm glad you enjoyed!
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Post time 31-10-2019 04:53 AM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
TalibanRock replied at 30-10-2019 08:29 AM
next time tag i please.

hi talibanrock.salam kenal.
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Post time 31-10-2019 04:55 AM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
kuihbakar replied at 30-10-2019 09:16 AM
Kihkihkih. Vocab kakokmu ini sungguh terhad dik. Haha nanti kakok bergigih ya

kak pah bijak kak.kecik2 kunyah buku teks.haha
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Post time 31-10-2019 04:58 AM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
nurrlisa replied at 30-10-2019 09:51 PM
From a sifu, with such detailed analysis, how can anyone else compete with this? Haha mod I sugges ...

eh jangan begitu.saya baru try2 ni nurrlisa.kena tak tau lagi.ramai forumer yang power2 takwil kat sini.trylah takwil.salah takpe .... asah minda kan ...
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Post time 31-10-2019 08:18 AM | Show all posts
KILL_NANCY replied at 31-10-2019 04:53 AM
hi talibanrock.salam kenal.

hi nancy..salam kenal jugekkk
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Post time 31-10-2019 10:38 AM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
KILL_NANCY replied at 31-10-2019 04:55 AM
kak pah bijak kak.kecik2 kunyah buku teks.haha

Ya dia sep2 bijak belaka. Buku teks tu blender je buat jus. Haha
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Post time 31-10-2019 03:17 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
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Post time 31-10-2019 03:19 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
kuihbakar replied at 31-10-2019 02:38 AM
Ya dia sep2 bijak belaka. Buku teks tu blender je buat jus. Haha

Hihi takkk saya kemam vitamin minda adi putra, sebab tu 1 + 1 jadi 10
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Post time 31-10-2019 03:27 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
nurrlisa replied at 30-10-2019 01:47 PM
Thank you sis Alex for the explanation. Such nice poem you wrote, I dont think I'm able to deciphe ...

Thank you sis my diction is simple I did Save That Albatross, kena revise sebab tak suka the nuances of it, too callow hollow sorrow melo not mellow
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Post time 31-10-2019 06:44 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
aleX-S replied at 31-10-2019 03:19 PM
Hihi takkk saya kemam vitamin minda adi putra, sebab tu 1 + 1 jadi 10

Haha. Akk telan kismis minda berkotak2 dah. Tapi dok tara tu jelah
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Post time 1-11-2019 10:55 AM | Show all posts
pemuisi kali ni menyatakan ttg apa yg dia rasa dan perhati
ada masa yg berada dipuncak dan atau disanjung juga akan tersadung
pemuisi juga menyatakan bhw klu dulu dia berada dibwh kini sebaliknya
ini kerana dunia ini berputar,yg berada di atas tidak selamanya dan begitu juga yg berada dibwh
akhir rangkap pemuisi menyatakan bhw kehidupan dia ttp hebat meskipun melalui pelbagai dugaan hidup



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 Author| Post time 1-11-2019 11:44 AM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
nurrlisa replied at 29-10-2019 06:52 PM
Thank you Sebab tag Saya mod. Nanti saya Cuba tafsir. Such a nice poem. Sebelum tu Alex ni lelaki At ...

Tag @OttoVonBismark musti terer takwil
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Post time 2-11-2019 06:27 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
Kisah suka duka penulis dalam dunia baru yang mencabar. Ada yang memandang rendah dirinya namun penulis yakin ada yang masih menghargainya.
Biarpun rasa sakit sangat dalam penulis tetap memaafkan mereka dan sangat berterima kasih kepada yang menyedari nilai dirinya tidak kira di mana pun dia berada.
Bila berada diambang kejayaan penulis tidak melupakan mereka yang membantunya.

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Post time 3-11-2019 11:32 AM | Show all posts
aleX-S replied at 31-10-2019 03:27 PM
Thank you sis  my diction is simple  I did Save That Albatross, kena revise se ...

Salam sis,

I tried, tapi sangat complicated your poem.

I supposed its about your ups and downs in life, how you are trying to find your identity and your purpose. I do, somehow feel that in the middle of the poem there's another person or person's opinion that's involved, but the rest is about you, as a third person looking down, on your own life.

Alas I digress

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