A Crazy Dream

I know it's impossible and quite ... impossible? but i just write. Anyone can correct me if i have any grammar or whatever mistakes?

My Crazy Dream

intro:
When the clock hit 12,
My eyes were so heavy..
No more energy to continue
The story book on my hands,
And fall into a deeeeep sleep.

Part 1
It's a thick fog
I couldn't see any better other than
A kind White paper in front of me.
Then the world go dark
Without signals, a bright light shine into my eyes
I close my eyes, almost immediatly
Then i heard a voice, that shouldn't be heard
"We love lights here"
It's from my book, one of the lines
I shocked, passed out

Part 2
Next thing i saw when i woke
It was breathe taking
Rainbows, butterflies
It's not from the show? "Care bear"?
Care bear appeared in front of me,
looks kind, buuut
it eyes glow red in a second, size into a huge
it came into a halt, pounded the ground
I leaped away

it mutated to some kind of ugly
i can't look at it face
badly stitched, scars
Malformed nose, month and eyes
I screamed, no use at all.
It catch me between it massive paws
meaning to flatten me
Dragons appear around me
It seems puffing up, and dragon was famous at
BREATHING FIRE!!!

I thought i was roasted chicken
But instead, i was somewhere
The fire beneath core
Hell
I damned, at the place of Damned
I'm  doomed

A ungly hand reached me
I screamed, hopeless
Then came the voice
Familliar
I struggling to open my eyes and see
Who was that? !
And i open my eyes wide.

Ending
it could be an worst
But no,
Just my mum, waking me
from the hellish nightmare
I realised i woke in cold sweat
Make a sick smile,
collasp back to my bed
Gasping for air........