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PaDA bINtANG kU LAyANGkAN

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 Author| Post time 17-4-2009 07:35 PM | Show all posts

Reply #99 ai_fah's post

no hal kasik layan lu punya jiwang karat aka lendiq tu wakakaakaak
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 Author| Post time 17-4-2009 07:36 PM | Show all posts

Reply #100 queen_aurora's post

cissssssssss kasik jahanam wa punya bintang je weyyy
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 Author| Post time 17-4-2009 07:37 PM | Show all posts
bintangku....
aku tiada masa untukmu...
pasti kau tidak hilang...
ku kan tiba dipaksimu...
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Post time 17-4-2009 08:51 PM | Show all posts
Originally posted by raudah at 17-4-2009 19:35
no hal kasik layan lu punya jiwang karat aka lendiq tu wakakaakaak


lepas tu wa sental ngan dawai besi beb....karat hilang, lendiq terbuang kekeke...
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 Author| Post time 18-4-2009 09:24 AM | Show all posts
Originally posted by ai_fah at 17-4-2009 20:51


lepas tu wa sental ngan dawai besi beb....karat hilang, lendiq terbuang kekeke...


siot jek ayat luxleh blah langsung weyyyyyyyyyyyyy
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Post time 18-4-2009 11:05 PM | Show all posts
Originally posted by raudah at 18-4-2009 09:24


siot jek ayat luxleh blah langsung weyyyyyyyyyyyyy



kekekeke sini tmpt buangan sisa wa weiiii... kluar dri sini wa clean n clear
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Post time 18-4-2009 11:20 PM | Show all posts
Bisik ku pada bintang
kembalikan temanku
kekasihku, syurgaku

Tanpa dia
Malam menemaniku
Sepi memelukku

Bintang........
jangan biar siang, biar alam ini kelam
Jangan biar ia sepi sepertiku

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 Author| Post time 20-4-2009 09:39 AM | Show all posts
Originally posted by ai_fah at 18-4-2009 23:05



kekekeke sini tmpt buangan sisa wa weiiii... kluar dri sini wa clean n clear


cisss..siot lu weyyypi loji la weyyyy
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Post time 20-4-2009 12:43 PM | Show all posts

Balas #108 raudah\ catat

wa sukakkkkkk sinikkkkk
luk kan sukak wa dtg bertandangggg kat sinikkkkkkk
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 Author| Post time 20-4-2009 01:56 PM | Show all posts
Originally posted by ai_fah at 20-4-2009 12:43
wa sukakkkkkk sinikkkkk
luk kan sukak wa dtg bertandangggg kat sinikkkkkkk

no hal bebbut lu dah kaco puitis bintang wa jd lawak

nak layan jiwa pon dah x boleh dahwa nak gelak jekkk
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Post time 20-4-2009 07:35 PM | Show all posts
Originally posted by raudah at 20-4-2009 13:56

no hal bebbut lu dah kaco puitis bintang wa jd lawak

nak layan jiwa pon dah x boleh dahwa nak gelak jekkk




sorry ar....tak terniat di hati
next time wa masuk ngan  karya2 wa la.....
wa konpius sebenarnya pandai ke wa berkarya....
but siyessss wei, nnti wa msk sini ngan bahasa puitis ar...
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Post time 22-4-2009 03:22 AM | Show all posts
bintang ku melayang.....................
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 Author| Post time 27-4-2009 02:08 PM | Show all posts
Originally posted by ai_fah at 20-4-2009 19:35




sorry ar....tak terniat di hati
next time wa masuk ngan  karya2 wa la.....
wa konpius sebenarnya pandai ke wa berkarya.... :l ...


ecehhh..cehhh....wa no hal beb
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 Author| Post time 27-4-2009 02:09 PM | Show all posts

Reply #112 queen_aurora's post

wa ada idea nak berpuitis looo
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 Author| Post time 27-4-2009 02:30 PM | Show all posts



bintangku...
aku datang bersama jiwaku..
bersama hati yang sayu
kekal pilu bertandang sayu..

bintangku...
begitu sendu sekali
syahdu melayan menitis mutiara
kala jiwa dirasuk nista

bintangku...
salah aku seketika
menutur bait tanpa sedar
terjatuh ke'sah terlakar ceritera

bintangku...
malam semakin pekat
jiwa tersadung kata
hati terguris nista
berlari aku merentas lara

bintangku...
salahku...
semakin menjerut sukma
parah jiwa menahan rasa
resah hati menggamit kejam
terseksa jiwa sinis dalam

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Post time 28-4-2009 01:59 AM | Show all posts
kunyanyikan pada bintang
irama suara hati
lagunya beralun tanpa nada
liriknya pula tiada kata kata
ia berlagu, namun sunyi dan sepi

ku bertanya pada bintang
mengapa.....
hati ku kelam....
jiwa ku suram...
mengapa...
bintang kau hanya berdiam

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 Author| Post time 29-4-2009 07:28 PM | Show all posts
bintangku
apa yang terjadi.....
telahpun terjadi..............

bintangku
salahkah aku............

bintangku...
mengapa begini..mengapa...

bintangku...
kuatkanlah aku..
hembuskanlah udara beku padaku
sematkanlah keteguhan ke dalam jiwaku

bintangku...
aku berdiri sendiri
mendengar hembusan bayu
segala kalimah saqti
terusik hati nan sendu
merenung fajar tersirna suci

bintangku...
pergi aku seketika..
menahan hati lara
menjerit sepi bergeming
dalam lautan qaseh kirmizi
  

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Post time 30-4-2009 02:30 AM | Show all posts
Tuan rumah....

kirmizi tu apa maknanya yek....
wa tanya betul ni wei....
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 Author| Post time 30-4-2009 10:00 AM | Show all posts
kirmizi itu adalah senja

kirmizi nan merah...

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Post time 30-4-2009 03:42 PM | Show all posts
Originally posted by raudah at 27-4-2009 14:09
wa ada idea nak berpuitis looo

ada.......berpuitis laaaa
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