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Post time 31-3-2010 11:58 PM | Show all posts
Ok la, its time. Oyasumi, minna. Mata ne.
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 Author| Post time 1-4-2010 12:00 AM | Show all posts
kena buat poll...
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Post time 1-4-2010 12:06 AM | Show all posts
Just a little sneak peak. any building comments? Ni bukan opening, hanya sebahagian drpd keseluruhan.

Yuusaku: It really is the best, watching the sky on the school’s rooftop. Why can’t I get a girlfriend? I’m the most good-looking guy in the school…. I think. If I have a girlfriend, we’re gonna do this, and that….. ohhh…. maybe THAT? (having a nosebleed) {:3_84:}
Kiriko: If you keep acting like this, you’re not going to have any girlfriend or even friends.
Yuusaku: Whoaahhhhh!!!!! busuRiko!!!(Ugly Riko) What the hell you’re doing? Trying to kill me by giving me a heart attack?
Kiriko: WHAT THE HELL YOU’RE SAYING?!!! I’LL KILL YOU!!!(stomping and kicking him).
Yuusaku: Brrrrr……. (lying on the floor, beaten).
Kiriko: You deserved it. Hmmppphhh…. (Went away)
Yuusaku: If only that wretch is not that ugly….. huh….. That really makes me mad. Gonna skip school today and go out to the game arcade.
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Post time 1-4-2010 06:13 AM | Show all posts
waaaaaaaaaaa...dah nk siap dah fanfic ko kia?... bestnyerrrrr...

lama ke ko pegi selatan bandar tu?... jauh ke dekat?

aku dh gi umah bishonen dah.... huahuahuaaa...
ibuKA Post at 31-3-2010 17:00


seharian jer.. ni dah balik semula.. ada kawan dari holland dtg.. so plan nak gi selatan bandar..
pegi Wicklow Gaol.. betul2 kat tepi laut.. it's a small port.. ari ni cuaca sangaaat la sejuk..
then pegi national park.. oh clue.. tak sempat nak guling2..
semalam salji turun kat ireland.. tempat kami pegi tuh kaw tanah tinggi.. of cos salji tebal kat situ... kalau cair tak leh nak duduk2 atau golek2..
balik ke bandar terus hujan salji lebat.. kami pegi plak perkampungan nelayan kat timur bandar.. beli ikan.. balik umah.. masak seafood gaya mesia dan tersandar kekenyangan..

fanfic tak siapkan.. walaupun 70% siap.. 30% tu yg penting.. lain tu sampingan jer.. so skng tgh hiatus dulu.. pening sat.. sebulan pon tempoh..
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Post time 1-4-2010 06:25 AM | Show all posts
Just a little sneak peak. any building comments? Ni bukan opening, hanya sebahagian drpd keseluruhan.

Yuusaku: It really is the best, watching the sky on the school’s rooftop. Why can’t I get a g ...
cmf_cluesan Post at 1-4-2010 00:06


Dr segi format.. aku tau la sape yg bercakap and any action. The words are understandable. Tapi kandungan citer mmg tak paham.. mau kene tepek sumer clue-chan..
tapi kala gaya ayat cenggini ok jer clue-chan.. gambatte.. aku je stuck ni hah.. takde idea bila dah highlights of the story
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Post time 1-4-2010 09:07 AM | Show all posts
64# Kia_picanto

best nye g jalan...
ikan ape banyak kat situ?
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Post time 1-4-2010 09:13 AM | Show all posts
Post Last Edit by marumaru at 1-4-2010 10:22

63# cmf_cluesan

setuju ngan kia-chan...
harusla kena tepek the whole story...{:2_70:}
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Post time 1-4-2010 09:34 AM | Show all posts
Dr segi format.. aku tau la sape yg bercakap and any action. The words are understandable. Tapi kandungan citer mmg tak paham.. mau kene tepek sumer clue-chan..
tapi kala gaya ayat cenggini ok ...
Kia_picanto Post at 1-4-2010 06:25


yupp...jalan cerita tak paham sgt...ko bagi sekerat...mana nk paham...
tapi 'gaya' tu dah ada...
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Post time 1-4-2010 10:31 AM | Show all posts
65# Kia_picanto

Tu la aku ckp, sneak peek. Bg jengah2 je. Thanks for your comments.
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Post time 1-4-2010 10:35 AM | Show all posts
67# marumaru

Post Last Edit by marumaru at 1-4-2010 10:22


Ahahaha... Td ada baca, tp tak sempat reply. Ni klu org yg tau pasal Yu Yu Hakusho, diorang faham yg budak2 dlm cite ni suka pegi Game Arcade. Org tua pun tau main game dlm cite ni.
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Post time 1-4-2010 10:36 AM | Show all posts
68# ibuKA

Ohh..... ok. Gambaru.
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Post time 1-4-2010 10:38 AM | Show all posts
Alamak.... aku da syok sendiri. Da 4 chapter aku buat, 2100 words... Sape nak baca panjang2 ni? Da la baru je masuk main event.
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Post time 1-4-2010 10:46 AM | Show all posts
Alamak.... aku da syok sendiri. Da 4 chapter aku buat, 2100 words... Sape nak baca panjang2 ni? Da la baru je masuk main event.
cmf_cluesan Post at 1-4-2010 10:38


ohayou clue...
ekau cuti ko?
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Post time 1-4-2010 10:48 AM | Show all posts
takpe la clue-chan...
ko tepek jekkk...ramai yg baca nanti... manala tau kot2 ko lak yg 1st prize?
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Post time 1-4-2010 10:50 AM | Show all posts
67# marumaru



Ahahaha... Td ada baca, tp tak sempat reply. Ni klu org yg tau pasal Yu Yu Hakusho, diorang faham yg budak2 dlm cite ni suka pegi Game Arcade. Org tua pun tau main game dlm cite  ...
cmf_cluesan Post at 1-4-2010 10:35


tingat dulu..ske gak gi arcade...gi sana main lawan keter...alaa...apa nama keter tuh aaa?... dah lupa plak...
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Post time 1-4-2010 10:53 AM | Show all posts
seharian jer.. ni dah balik semula.. ada kawan dari holland dtg.. so plan nak gi selatan bandar..
pegi Wicklow Gaol.. betul2 kat tepi laut.. it's a small port.. ari ni cuaca sangaaat la sejuk..: ...
Kia_picanto Post at 1-4-2010 06:13


uuuu...best tak hujan salji?...

kia...at least ko dah ado gak 70%...  clue-chan lagi lak melampau tahap imaginasi dia... masuk chap.4 dah...
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Post time 1-4-2010 11:30 AM | Show all posts
73# ibuKA

Tak cuti, tp bnyk free time ari ni. Sbb keje da siap awal.
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Post time 1-4-2010 11:32 AM | Show all posts
74# ibuKA

Isyyhhh..... 1st prize? Harap2 tak la. Bg la peluang org len. T-Shirt tu, suma mod dapat. RM70 or RM30 tu, bagi la bebudak yg tgh sekolah atau yg tgk belajar kat uni.
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Post time 1-4-2010 11:33 AM | Show all posts
75# ibuKA

Ohh.... Daytona. Best. Tp budak2 skang da ada Initial D punya arcade. Nmpk mcm lagi best je.
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Post time 1-4-2010 11:36 AM | Show all posts
76# ibuKA

Ye la, nak memperkenalkan karakter. Krisis pengenalan. Karakter punya development. Lepas tu baru la pegi last chapter, all out. Nak bagi org betul2 faham karakter ni. Klu suma orang penah tgk Yu Yu Hakusho, diorang faham la. Klu org yg tak pernah dgr langsung cite ni, mmg payah nak faham. Ada wide range of audience nnt. Tu yg nk kena terangkan satu2.
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