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Post time 6-1-2012 10:53 AM | Show all posts
Bila jemu bertengkar, tulis poem pula eheh.


thanks sebab sudi baca by the way.
truly Post at 5-1-2012 23:15



    sebenarnya puisi ni senang kalau kita betul2 mengikut hati n perasaan tp dlm masa yg sama pemikiran kita begitu tenang dlm mengolah ayat

ecehhh..cehhhh
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 Author| Post time 6-1-2012 11:34 AM | Show all posts
sebenarnya puisi ni senang kalau kita betul2 mengikut hati n perasaan tp dlm masa yg sama  ...
cmf_raudah Post at 6-1-2012 10:53


Betul. Tambah kalau bersorangan memandang bulan. Puisi puisi I suka pada gelap, pada hujan, pada bulan bintang.....


Dari puisi seseorang, banyak kita boleh belajar
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 Author| Post time 10-1-2012 11:06 PM | Show all posts
Post Last Edit by truly at 13-1-2012 22:26

  


You know the rest..



Intelligence and wit and well-read

All the criteria have been met.



Not even the size of the furniture

Will stop this kind of venture



So, I think we both shouldn't look any further



I would like to suggest

You and the white horse

And me damsel in distress....



You know the rest..



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 Author| Post time 21-1-2012 11:05 PM | Show all posts
In the blink of an eye...



In the blink of an eye....

Set was your plan to say goodbye

I read the paper tinted with tears that ran dry...



On our final farewell....

Overflowing griefs of pain I know too well.....

As we prepare for our love funeral....



Flowers lose petal to the ground

Separation changes our smile to a frown.



To a love...

Happiness is no a longer a perfect turn to this union...

A symphony of candles that burned.....



In the blink of an eye...

Your final farewell echos in the calm sky..

In tears I said my goodbye..



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 Author| Post time 14-2-2012 02:19 PM | Show all posts
Post Last Edit by truly at 14-2-2012 14:21

To you. I had wanted to put a picture of the card but this place keep asking me for the 'url'. I have no idea how to get that so I guess I'm not putting a picture. I know you would have liked it. Nevertheless, I hope you will like this homemade poem to celebrate the valentine day. Well, I need lunch now, contrary to what I had said. Anyway, do enjoy the rest of the day....and be happy!



To a special friend…on occasion of this valentine day.


If anyone had predicted
That someday our destiny would meet
And it is you that I share my secret…

I would have laughed at the possibility so bleak
How can I even proceed?
To imagine such pleasure we create
For we have not yet met..

Yet your words hypnotized me so
From my head down to my toe
Each time I’m with you it is bliss
Each moment I would not want to miss

So my dear special friend
Let me make you understand…

That

I’m happy you came into my life
And occasionally in my dreams
And in my fantasy extreme….

I’m happy to let you know
You mean to me more that I mentioned so..

And

I asked you in return….
My dear special friend
Would you kiss my lips and hold my hands
Would you be my valentine?  


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Post time 14-2-2012 07:03 PM | Show all posts
tru...kenal tak Emily Dickinson??
lkick2113 Post at 4-1-2012 23:22

There is another sky by Emily Dickinson

There is another sky,
Ever serene and fair,
And there is another sunshine,
Though it be darkness there;
Never mind faded forests, Austin,
Never mind silent fields -
Here is a little forest,
Whose leaf is ever green;
Here is a brighter garden,
Where not a frost has been;
In its unfading flowers
I hear the bright bee hum:
Prithee, my brother,
Into my garden come!

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Post time 14-2-2012 07:45 PM | Show all posts
This one poem, the first ever from me was written just now...I hope TT like it....and don't laugh at the shallowness of this amateur poem..he..he..


You are like onions
You were the silhouette
in the mist..
You were nowhere near
to be seen or touched
but your presence
was like the warm air that
wrapped around me to sooth me
from the brazen cold wind
that swept the dried leaves
leaving the ground barren
with dirt strewn everywhere.
I was standing in the dark…
I wanted to reach out for you
But you were elusive
Knowing you were near
Yet so far..
You were like an onion
You were shrouded in layers of mystery
Layers that mystified me..
I wanted to peel you
Layers by layers…
To see inside you..
to know you
to venture into the unknown
where reality intertwines with fantasy
fantasy that has gone to unreachable depth
or reaching to the skies of
unreachable height
I haven’t the slightest clue
But I’m gonna do what I needed to do….

(Ronin/7:41pm/14.02.2012)

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Post time 14-2-2012 08:31 PM | Show all posts
Reply 1# truly


    Very nice.... it really goes deep inside & touches the heart....
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 Author| Post time 14-2-2012 09:40 PM | Show all posts
This one poem, the first ever from me was written just now...I hope TT like it....and don't laugh at ...
ronin Post at 14-2-2012 19:45


This is amazing!! I love it. I didn't know you could write this good. You know you should write more.... Seriously you have the emotions really covered well...and peeling like an onion.
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 Author| Post time 14-2-2012 09:41 PM | Show all posts
Reply  truly


    Very nice.... it really goes deep inside & touches the heart....
MsIda Post at 14-2-2012 20:31


Thank you for your kind words MsIda. I appreciate that and thanks for stopping by.
Keep reading!
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Post time 15-2-2012 08:03 AM | Show all posts
keep on writing tru.......
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Post time 15-2-2012 11:18 AM | Show all posts
This is amazing!! I love it. I didn't know you could write this good. You know you should write  ...
truly Post at 14-2-2012 21:40


Thanks.....I don't think it is that good...however I will try to improve....
Actually long before this I bought a book "American Poetry of the Twentieth Century" trying to learn something about poems...but I did not finish reading it!
So this morning, I searched for the book and found it....and with me now, so I'm gonna learn the finer points...hope to improve every step of the way....
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 Author| Post time 15-2-2012 09:32 PM | Show all posts
keep on writing tru.......
lkick2113 Post at 15-2-2012 08:03


hi ikick, jauh you datang thank you. InsyaAllah I will write from time to time, bila ader idea hehe.
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 Author| Post time 15-2-2012 09:33 PM | Show all posts
Thanks.....I don't think it is that good...however I will try to improve....
Actually long befo ...
ronin Post at 15-2-2012 11:18


hehe mana aci, you pakai buku...mesti la you will be better than me. You have to lend me the book too.


Welcome to my thread, I hope you will be a permanent resident here and contribute more. I pun nak start writing quite seriously hehe. buat research dulu.
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 Author| Post time 18-2-2012 01:26 AM | Show all posts



Cold dark night..



The night so lonely


Darkness stands before me


Like a blind alone in the dark alley


The midnight rain keeps every step slippery


And the soul slowly becomes empty


My heart thrown around carelessly..




Cold dark night


Has become an affair


Since you are nowhere in sight


Tonight, at least tonight you should be there.....




Pain is nowhere to hide


and pleasures start to collide


cold dark night stares in intimidation


I wonder what is there except termination


Dreams of love had left the station


Never to return




I have in me no imagination..


Or wanting love neither satisfaction


A Life laced with frustration..




In this cold dark night


Tell me that you will bring the light....


So I know I will be alright




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 Author| Post time 18-2-2012 01:28 AM | Show all posts
Thanks.....I don't think it is that good...however I will try to improve....
Actually long befo ...
ronin Post at 15-2-2012 11:18


cold dark night is an attempt for me to put more emotion in my writing. Written at 1.30 am, still awake and thinking about life.....My Friends had left and I'm alone. See the poem above.
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Post time 19-2-2012 09:54 AM | Show all posts
hehe mana aci, you pakai buku...mesti la you will be better than me. You have to lend me the boo ...
truly Post at 15-2-2012 21:33
I will definitely lend the book when I've finished reading....but sincerely I think you don't need the book because you have reached the skies of unreachable height.....
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Post time 19-2-2012 09:59 AM | Show all posts
cold dark night is an attempt for me to put more emotion in my writing. Written at 1.30 am, stil ...
truly Post at 18-2-2012 01:28


The thing that inhibits emotion is watching movies with friends......but as soon as you are alone and in darkness, it beckons emotion like a beacon that attract sailors....
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Post time 19-2-2012 10:03 AM | Show all posts


In this cold dark night


Tell me that you will bring the light....


So I know I will be alright

truly Post at 18-2-2012 01:26


I like this part.....light a beacon in the cold dark night......showing the way, giving ray of hope for someone in search of the right path....
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 Author| Post time 19-2-2012 07:05 PM | Show all posts
I will definitely lend the book when I've finished reading....but sincerely I think you don't need t ...
ronin Post at 19-2-2012 09:54


the sky of unreachable height, is that beyond the ozone layer?


I welcome the book very much.
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