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 Author| Post time 28-11-2014 11:02 AM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
Ramai komentor tk phm. Tapi aku rasa aku phm cter ni.  Cucu dia pembunuh dan mayat mak dia dlm  bilik?

Red Dress

Granny locked me in my room and she won’t
let me out. She says it’s because I was bad.
Sometimes I do bad things. Ever since my
mommy went away. Granny says my mommy
is in heaven. I don’t know how she got there.
I can still remember mommy. I remember her
long black hair and her dark eyes. I remember
her red lips and her white teeth. I remember
her soft skin. I remember the way she smelled.
Her red dress still smells like her. It’s hanging
in the wardrobe in her bedroom. Granny keeps
mommy’s room locked. She says I’m not
allowed in there, but I know where she hides
the key. Sometimes when granny falls asleep I
sneak in there and smell mommy’s red dress.
I have a friend called Mary Ann. She lives
across the street. Sometimes she comes over
to my house to play. She came over today. We
were playing with dolls.

Granny told me, “Don’t go into your mother’s
room.”
“OK,” I said.
When Granny took her nap, I told Mary Ann,
“Let’s play dress-up.”

I took the key from Granny’s hiding place and
unlocked the door to mommy’s bedroom. We
went inside. It was almost too dark to see.
“This is where my mommy lives,” I said.
“You don’t have a mommy,” Mary Ann said.
That made me angry. I opened the wardrobe
and took out the red silk dress.

“This is my mommy’s dress,” I said. I held it
up to show her.
“It stinks,” Mary Ann said.
“No it doesn’t,” I said. “It smells like flowers.”
“It smells like dead things,” she said.
That made me even more angry.
“Who’s that?” asked Mary Ann. She was
pointing at a picture.
“That’s my mommy,” I said. “Isn’t she
beautiful?”

“She’s ugly,” Mary Ann said. “She has creepy
eyes and her teeth are weird.”
“No she hasn’t,” I said. “She looks like the
most beautiful girl in the world!”
“She looks like a dead thing,” Mary Ann said.
That made me the angriest of all.
I don’t remember what happened then. I think
I heard Mary Ann screaming. I don’t remember
why. It was dark and I almost couldn’t see. I
couldn’t hear anything except Mary Ann
screaming.

I think something bad happened.
Then I remember granny shouting at me. She
was crying too. She took the red dress off me.
She was really rough and she kept hitting me.
I was crying too.
Granny fetched a washcloth and wiped the
blood off my face. She told me over and over
how bad I was. Then, she dragged me all the
way upstairs and locked me in my room.
I looked out the window and saw granny in
the back yard. She was burying something
with a shovel.
I must have done something really bad.
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Post time 28-11-2014 12:46 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
lovechaser posted on 27-11-2014 10:45 AM
Robert, the security guard, drew his gun, took a deep breath, and headed down a shadowy corridor ful ...

jawapannye bapak die yg bunuh sebab die taw alicia tu de inheritance. so die sebagai trustee till anak dia kawen or umur 30.

so bapak alicia bunuh robert tu supaya dorang xdpt kawen n nak bunuh anak die supaya die dapat harta sume..betol dak?
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Post time 28-11-2014 01:22 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
Esmiria posted on 28-11-2014 11:02 AM
Ramai komentor tk phm. Tapi aku rasa aku phm cter ni.  Cucu dia pembunuh dan mayat mak dia dlm  bili ...

cucu die pembunuh mary n mak die n nenek die still simpan myt mak die
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Post time 28-11-2014 01:37 PM | Show all posts
lovechaser posted on 27-11-2014 10:45 AM
Robert, the security guard, drew his gun, took a deep breath, and headed down a shadowy corridor ful ...

Possibility:

1. Alicia bunuh Jason sbb Jason nak leave her. Her injuries were self-inflicted.
2. Bapak Alicia bunuh Jason sbb kalau Alicia kawen dgn Jason, he doesn't get to share the inheritance.

Satu soalan je.. siapakah Robert? Pelakon sampingan je?

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 Author| Post time 28-11-2014 01:38 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
rara90 posted on 28-11-2014 04:46 AM
jawapannye bapak die yg bunuh sebab die taw alicia tu de inheritance. so die sebagai trustee till  ...

Alicia ler. sebb pembunuh tk exit or enter?
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Post time 28-11-2014 01:41 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
Esmiria posted on 28-11-2014 01:38 PM
Alicia ler. sebb pembunuh tk exit or enter?

bapak die pun kan x exit n enter..ye dak
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 Author| Post time 28-11-2014 01:51 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
rara90 posted on 28-11-2014 05:41 AM
bapak die pun kan x exit n enter..ye dak

err kna bca blik.
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Post time 28-11-2014 02:02 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
Esmiria posted on 28-11-2014 01:51 PM
err kna bca blik.

baca dulu..hehe..dan bapak die taw mana letak ax tu sedangkan mangsa lain xtaw ax tu dr mana..hehehe
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 Author| Post time 28-11-2014 02:10 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
rara90 posted on 28-11-2014 06:02 AM
baca dulu..hehe..dan bapak die taw mana letak ax tu sedangkan mangsa lain xtaw ax tu dr mana..hehe ...

Tak perasan lak.
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 Author| Post time 28-11-2014 02:10 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
rara90 posted on 28-11-2014 06:02 AM
baca dulu..hehe..dan bapak die taw mana letak ax tu sedangkan mangsa lain xtaw ax tu dr mana..hehe ...

Tak perasan lak.
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Post time 28-11-2014 04:11 PM | Show all posts
There was a 20-year old girl who lived with
her boyfriend. Their life together was a perfect
idyll and they both hoped that nothing would
happen to change it. Each time they
embraced, she told her boyfriend that she
could not live without him. He assured her
that he felt the same way. They were madly in
love.


Jawapan sape ghost = Girl kut coz memula ayat "There WAS a girl" ... bese Nye kalo dah mati, baru gune was.
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 Author| Post time 28-11-2014 04:19 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
meiya_loya posted on 28-11-2014 08:11 AM
Jawapan sape ghost = Girl kut coz memula ayat "There WAS a girl" ... bese Nye kalo dah mati, bar ...

Err..cter ni bkn dlm past tense ke?
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Post time 30-11-2014 07:56 AM | Show all posts
Esmiria posted on 27-11-2014 03:50 PM
acaner blh jdi gitu?

sebab anak dia tuh skang waris harta sehingga la dia kawen...kira mcm nk bolot sorg2 la...gitu? hahahaha

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Post time 1-12-2014 11:17 AM | Show all posts
lovechaser posted on 27-11-2014 10:45 AM
Robert, the security guard, drew his gun, took a deep breath, and headed down a shadowy corridor ful ...

pendapat aku la:

Alicia yang bunuh.

Motif:
1. Alicia nanges kat Todd, sick of Jason.
2. Jason plak bgtau Millie nak tinggalkan Alicia.
= So relationship Alicia-Jason ade problem

3. Alicia bagitau polis diorang still happy together.
= Nampak macam die tak bleh terime hubungan diorang problem. Mungkin jugak nak avoid suspicion polis kalau cakap die ade problem dengan Jason

Pembunuhan:
1. Inside job
2. Takde yang masuk n keluar
3. Jason mati, Alicia cedera
4. Mask, costume n axe cume ade 2 blood sample = Alicia n Jason
    = Jason ade melawan balik n swing back the axe, so axe tu patut ade blood sample attacker

Kekantoian:
I don't know why I ran into the dungeon room. There's no other exit. This maniac pushed open the door and started swinging. I fell to the floor, then I must've passed out. I guess he thought I was dead, 'cause the next thing I know, the security guard was waking me up.

Cube bayangkan betul2 keadaan atas tu.
Attacker tu dah push the door n swinging. Alicia pass out. Attacker ingat Alicia dah mati, so die blah.
Mase attacker tu push the door n swinging, PATUTNYE pintu dah terbukak luas / terbukak cukup untuk attacker masuk.
Alicia kate die pengsan, patutnye die pengsan jauh dari pintu, sebab attacker tu ade kat pintu. Skang bace balik perenggan awal.

Robert tried the door on the left. Locked. Then the one on the right. Unlocked. He pushed it open two inches, and then it hit something, something that moaned.

So Robert jumpe Alicia mase ni. Bace balik, Robert pushed 2 inches (5 cm), hit something (Alicia). Alicia betul2 ade kat belakang pintu. Dah tak logik ikut citer die.
Possible jugak kalau Alicia hold the door, pastu attacker tu sekadar hulur tangan swinging, tapi Alicia pass out lepas tu. Attacker bleh je tolak pintu tengok ape jadi.
Dan yang paling penting, Alicia setakat bruises n cut, kenape attacker tak habiskan die je? Macamane attacker bleh ingat Alicia dah mati?

Plot twist bapak die yang bunuh - dalam short story ni langsung tak bagi hint. Nakkan harte Alicia? Bapak die pun maybe inherit, tapi tak dibagitau kat sini. Lagipun dalam citer ni tak dibagitau banyak pasal bapak die.

So aku buat deduction yang Alicia bunuh. (lagu soundrack detective conan kat background) Hehehe
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Post time 1-12-2014 11:46 AM | Show all posts
sham-xv1986 posted on 1-12-2014 11:17 AM
pendapat aku la:

Alicia yang bunuh.

hahahaha dasat!!!!!

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Post time 1-12-2014 12:33 PM | Show all posts
Esmiria posted on 27-11-2014 10:51 AM
Cer baca balik soklan tu.

jawapan aku mak die cuci dinding dapur (yang selalu pakai jubin) sampai bekilat... tapi ade orang da jawab tu ko kate salah...
so tak tau jwapan. hehehe
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 Author| Post time 1-12-2014 12:36 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
sham-xv1986 posted on 1-12-2014 04:33 AM
jawapan aku mak die cuci dinding dapur (yang selalu pakai jubin) sampai bekilat... tapi ade orang  ...

saloh…………………
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Post time 1-12-2014 12:42 PM | Show all posts
Esmiria posted on 21-11-2014 03:34 PM
Ni haku reka..

geng edward ni,,,vampire!! hahaha

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Post time 1-12-2014 12:44 PM | Show all posts
Esmiria posted on 1-12-2014 12:36 PM
saloh…………………

aaaaaaa ape jawapannye~
hehehehe
teseksa jiwa raga aku nih.
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 Author| Post time 1-12-2014 01:01 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
sham-xv1986 posted on 1-12-2014 03:17 AM
pendapat aku la:

Alicia yang bunuh.

Riddle tu panjang sgt . So aku men agak. Kn betul, aku teka alice sebab takde yg masuk kuar.

Ingles yg guna sofiskated word ni, aku lmh sikit.
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