My first model photoshoot

sinistersworld · Post time 31-8-2007 08:37 PM

Since this is my first ever, well the pictures aren't that good.. Anyway, here is some of them.. please tear it up with ur comments..

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#3 - I can't go back any further without hitting someone at d back

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nasdin · Post time 31-8-2007 08:50 PM

kire ok la tu...........ada tatu lagi !!!!

bhc_keorange · Post time 31-8-2007 08:53 PM

no komen aku

0001 · Post time 31-8-2007 09:38 PM

not bad... composition is fine...

... but you got too much hard shadows in most of the pics... try using diffused lighting rather than direct light. The sunset pic (#6) is best but you need to Photoshop it a bit... kill the shiny parts on the face and the red mark on her knees.

Yeah, nice tattoo but I think you should either hide it completely, or show it completely (#7) - not show part of it... people tend to be a tab bit dissatisfied seeing only part of it.

Hope to see more of your shots here.

sinistersworld · Post time 31-8-2007 09:53 PM

Originally posted by 0001 at 31-8-2007 09:38 PM
not bad... composition is fine...

... but you got too much hard shadows in most of the pics... try using diffused lighting rather than direct light. The sunset pic (#6) is best but you need to ...

on the harsh lighting in tha hotel.. it was not my setting.. i juz use it.. not my first choice.. but better den nothing...

On the tatoo part.. unfortunately.. it is half a butterfly.. i have no idea why though..

by d way how to kill d shiny part in her face?

[ Last edited by sinistersworld at 31-8-2007 10:11 PM ]

0001 · Post time 1-9-2007 12:41 AM

You can use either the HEALING BRUSH TOOL or the CLONE TOOL. Take a sample from a spot on her face that you estimate is the proper color to use and use it over the shiny parts. Same tool/s can be used for the red mark on her knee.

BTW, about the tattoo... maybe she changed her mind halfway thru doing that?

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Caranthir · Post time 1-9-2007 01:34 AM

outdoor series are umm ok.. indoor, rosak..

sinistersworld · Post time 1-9-2007 09:33 AM

Yg outdoor ok pasal aku masih ada mood nak ambik gambar... walapun tak de mood sgt... tapi dlm hotel memang tak de langsung... aku siap buat burst shot dlm hotel...

Aku mula2 nak balik.. tapi kawan aku kata jgn.. so terpaksa lah abihkan photoshoot tu...

Caranthir · Post time 1-9-2007 01:05 PM

LOL!

aku paham sgt perasaan tuh..

whitedove07 · Post time 1-9-2007 01:32 PM

lenkali gune model lain lah.

sinistersworld · Post time 1-9-2007 02:39 PM

bkn masalah model.. model ok dan baik... adalah sorang hamba allah tu di bossy sgt... semua nak ikut ckp dia.. bila dah pose org tu.. bila dia ambik gambar.. dia suruh model tu pose lain lah.. tak bagi langsung orang nak ambik gambar... rasa mcm nak belasah kepala dia dgn kamera aku je ari tu...

alongarts · Post time 3-9-2007 08:52 AM

pas nie carik model sendiri organize baik baik mesti best....
tempat dah best dah tu kat hotel.... teruja lak aku hahahahah
cuma 1 jer aku tak suka kat loket tu... adussss
tiba tiba aku teringatkan seseorg....

sinistersworld · Post time 3-9-2007 09:32 AM

Originally posted by alongarts at 3-9-2007 08:52 AM
pas nie carik model sendiri organize baik baik mesti best....
tempat dah best dah tu kat hotel.... teruja lak aku hahahahah
cuma 1 jer aku tak suka kat loket tu... adussss
tiba tiba aku terin ...

lain lak bunyi tu bang... arange model sendiri kat hotel..

alongarts · Post time 3-9-2007 09:55 AM

oh tak pernah buat yer.... hik hik hik
meh nak ajaq meh...
tapi kena sign apa yg patut kan...
harta intelek gitu

sinistersworld · Post time 3-9-2007 07:11 PM

Originally posted by alongarts at 3-9-2007 09:55 AM
oh tak pernah buat yer.... hik hik hik
meh nak ajaq meh...
tapi kena sign apa yg patut kan...
harta intelek gitu

wah.. sgt bahaya ni..