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best...tapi nanti baru aku komen....
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Reply #380 narcolepsy's post
lagu tu mmg best,nyanyian i cmne? |
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baru aku sedar...rupanya suara shuffeak macam mana...kalau kau tak kawal vocal kau dengan baik, dia akan jadi sengau...bila kau kawal vocal bebetul, concentrate, baru tak sengau...
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Reply #383 Urban_Iz's post
oh yeke,pandai ko kaji kan,aku pun x penah perasan ttg kesengauanku |
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apa2pun, i amat berpuas hati both lagu. splendid.
sengau kalau sikit2 takpe kalau dapat mewarnai lagu ittew. but it is depend. |
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rumah rembesan pilu dgn ini menjemput incik iz utk mengkritik nyanyianku dgn font berwarna hijau |
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sorry lambat letak comment...aku tengok Asian Idol tadi...
Beautiful Soul
Starting lagu ni was fun...but I was a little distracted with your way of pronouncing the word "pretty"...mungkin kau punya style or whatever, but personally i think you don't have to change the proper pronunciation of that word to make your singing sounded more interesting or whatever you intended to do...
a fun rendition from you, but i was a little shock when i listen to your singing as if it sounds a little bit of sengau...bahagian "i know that you~", yang "i know " tu flat pitch...the same goes with "to you I'd be always faithful~" part "to you" tu pun flat jugak...mungkin kau ada masalah recognize melody asal...it's ok to improvise the melody, but make sure it goes parallel with the music played...falsetto memang solid...aku kalau tanpa proper practice pada bahagian falsetto ni boleh tergelincir jugak, but kau macam effortlessly buat falsetto kat sini...
the chorus part was flawless...again, personally i think ths song is unstable type of song...because this song at some part is easy to sing, and some part of it is hard to sing as you might not noticed your error while singig this song...once again, part "you might need time to think it over~" dan "but i'm just fine moving forward~"...untuk "you night" dan "but i'm" memang tak kena bunyi dia...improvisation of the melody was just not right...part "i'll ease you mind~" yang "your mind" tu kau buat falsetto tapi terkucil atau tergelincir sikit...
part " i you give me the chance i'll never make you cry come on let's try~", bahagian ni tempo kau lari...maybe kau tak tahu the proper melody yang played kat sini sebab word dia banyak mungkin kau tak tau suaikan ayat dengan chord music...part belting "soul~" kinda disapointing...aku rasa kau boleh belting...maybe kau takut nak try kot...tapi kat sini aku rasa tak berapa baik in-term of buat falsetto yang solid maybe kau tak cukup nafas ke sebab aku boleh dengar yang kau tak dapat nak sustain note tu lelama... part bridge yang aku tak faham...i was wondering why you change the lyrics "there is nothing left to hide~" into "i just wanna know that you feel it too~"...it's just like two different type of world you know...mungkin kau tak hafal lyric kot so kau main hentam je...
towards the end of the song, there is no flaw i can detect...so, it' a good job..
overall, it's 3 out of 5...
p/s: this comment is UNINTENDEDLY to offence any individuals. if so, apologize in advance...
terlebih speaking plak aku...
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[ Last edited by Urban_Iz at 16-12-2007 01:29 AM ] |
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Here without you
tak banyak yang aku boleh komen untuk lagu ni sebab aku rasa kau nyanyi lagu ni best...tapi jangan risau, i ALWAYS have something to say...
part chorus "I'm here without you BABY~" aku rasa kau takut sangat nak lontar suara...kau guna placement kat hidung makes you a little sengau...sebab kalau nak elak sengau kat part tu sepatutnya vocal dilontar, tapi at this part kau tarik kau punya vocal...towards the end, aku rasa kau macam distracted by something sebab kau punya tempo kat sini ada lari sikit...aku nak puji part ad-lib...as it is my expertise...ad-lib kau tak melebih |
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Reply #394 Urban_Iz's post
yay!!aku da dpt comment yg panjang dan font ijau dari iz:pompom: :pompom: :pompom: :pompom:
thanks iz!! |
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best!, usaha yg baik :pompom: :pompom: |
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shuffeak? ade crack tuk soundforge tak? |
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