[HORA] BROKEN VOW - LIVE VERSION (RECORDED ON 02ND. JUNE 2009)

alyana · Post time 16-3-2008 01:20 AM

My Baby you

Recording Wise = The best ever in this board history!

Teknik & Emotion = Sengau so ketara. Lack of energy and emotion. ade part yg meleweh and lemau e.g My baby you + Cause of you + Baby you+ etc. But bila u sebut your the reason I feel, this lenggok is good.

diction = oklah kot

Styling & Dynamic = Vibrato u jadi, tp tak sedap. susah nak cakap mcm mana. Another thing is that, mmg la u try to apply dynamic dgn lower the voice volume and breathy tone, but tak jadilah, sorry. nak2 kat verse 1 and 2.

Chorus 1 = u hit the note, but not booming! it just lalu shj tp u tak pijak2 dia. paham ke? sbb with proper teknik, when said aboveeeeeee eeeeeeeeeee, it can be very tebal and so berhantu with power!. but u takde kat sini. nevertheless, u mmg hit the note, but just hit gitu ajelah. so i tak puas hati sgt2

Chorus 2 = u gantikan high note dgn falsetto. to me it was so penipu.

. again, ur problem sama dgn chorus 1. but bila u sebut arina, I feel ( ni sungguh energetic, bold and tebal) bagus.

Overall = Agak better sikittt jek dr versi urban Iz. Good effort. and entertaining. but need a lot of practise and betulkan here and there.

[ Last edited by alyana at 16-3-2008 11:43 AM ]

seroja · Post time 16-3-2008 01:24 AM

wahh... besnye komen kaka yana

seroja · Post time 16-3-2008 01:25 AM

abg shuff off topic!

fotong kedit

shuffeak · Post time 16-3-2008 01:27 AM

diction menyedihkan utk lagu my baby u

shuffeak · Post time 16-3-2008 01:28 AM

gile kuasa

alyana · Post time 16-3-2008 01:28 AM

Originally posted by seroja at 16-3-2008 01:24 AM
wahh... besnye komen kaka yana

lagu ni tak boleh tipu2 i , sbb i dah tgk ramai2 sgt2 org perform lagu ni

sampai nak termuntah. so i just share ajelah apa yg i tahu. even by second kat mana dia buat itu ini or word pun i leh komen. but malaslah.

so conclusionnya, mana2 yg dia rasa leh terima ambillah. mana2 yg tak logic tu, abaikan

alyana · Post time 16-3-2008 01:29 AM

Originally posted by shuffeak at 16-3-2008 01:27 AM
diction menyedihkan utk lagu my baby u

itu ajeker, komenlah lagi

shuffeak · Post time 16-3-2008 01:31 AM

Originally posted by shuffeak at 16-3-2008 01:28 AM
gile kuasa

i masih merajuk ngan org itu ok

seroja · Post time 16-3-2008 01:31 AM

oja ta dpt dengar demo my baby you - sham.
tapi dah dengar demo iz.:

alyana · Post time 16-3-2008 01:31 AM

Originally posted by alyana at 16-3-2008 01:05 AM
sham, uplad lagu minus one tuk lagu my baby you ni . i nak letak dlm ringtone

sham, yg ni jgn lupa tau.

i dah komen dgn gigih ni

seroja · Post time 16-3-2008 01:32 AM

Originally posted by shuffeak at 16-3-2008 01:28 AM
gile meroyan

mane ade!

:@:@

buiscasey · Post time 16-3-2008 09:50 AM

edited... tak nak mengguris perasaan..

oja.. edit cepat.. buang quote tu...

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seroja · Post time 16-3-2008 10:33 AM

[ Last edited by seroja at 16-3-2008 12:49 PM ]

alyana · Post time 16-3-2008 11:42 AM

Originally posted by buiscasey at 16-3-2008 09:50 AM
buiscasey hensem

untuk lagu tu ajelah, tapi lagu2 lain ada yg iz better.

alamak kejam sgt ek, baik i tukar statement , nanti mengguris perasaan org pula .

[ Last edited by alyana at 16-3-2008 01:42 PM ]

Urban_Iz · Post time 16-3-2008 02:41 PM

am i missing something????

Urban_Iz · Post time 16-3-2008 02:42 PM

Originally posted by alyana at 16-3-2008 01:20 AM
My Baby you

Recording Wise = The best ever in this board history!

Teknik & Emotion = Sengau so ketara. Lack of energy and emotion. ade part yg meleweh and lemau e.g My baby you + Cause of y ...

yana belum pun komen lagu