All the wonders of you....

truly

mierrr

wahh Tru...i pun masuk ni...ni u create sendiri ya....pandai...

truly

wahh Tru...i pun masuk ni...ni u create sendiri ya....pandai...
mierrr Post at 28-10-2011 23:07

thanks hehe mesti la buat sendiri, baru buat jap tadi. untuk ex  I hehe.


Tu you belum tengok I buat puisi bahasa melayu. I minat menulis cuma masa tak mengizinkan.

mierrr

thanks hehe mesti la buat sendiri, baru buat jap tadi. untuk ex  I hehe.


Tu you belum tengo ...
truly Post at 28-10-2011 23:10

wah..bagusnya...



oh..patutla ada ayat yang sedih ..kalau sastera ayat sedih kita panggil apa ya...melankolik..err betul ke i ni..

nanti buatla dalam bahasa melayu pula..tp B.I pun ok...

transkripsi

alamak sedih lh pulak ni T .
jgn sedih2 yer .

poem ni mmg ikhlas dr hati yg luhur ..
good job T ..

truly

Thanks semua. Nanti I tulis lagi. Dah, tak boleh sembang sini, nanti mod sini marah. Ni bod puisi kan? Baru I nak masuk nanti kena marah pulak hehe

lkick2113

very talented and such a poetic rhymes

truly

very talented and such a poetic rhymes
lkick2113 Post at 28-10-2011 23:45

hehe thanks. You dah puji ni I kembang semangkuk, malu taw.


jom kita balik CI, nanti bila bila I tulis lagi hehe.

lkick2113

hehe thanks. You dah puji ni I kembang semangkuk, malu taw.


jom kita balik CI, ...
truly Post at 28-10-2011 23:48

    that's compliment memang ikhlas tru.... tru u minat tulis lirik lagu tak???

truly

that's compliment memang ikhlas tru.... tru u minat tulis lirik lagu tak???
lkick2113 Post at 28-10-2011 23:54

tulis lagu? hish tak pernah try. Nak tulis buat apa hehe. Kalau I ada masa, memang ada jugak I berpuisi, koleksi peribadi. In fact masa I bercuti, ader jer puisi I tulis. lepas tu simpan. Poem ni I buat tak sampai 5 minit pun, cewah berlagak la pulak hehe tu la jangan puji.

lkick2113

tulis lagu? hish tak pernah try. Nak tulis buat apa hehe. Kalau I ada masa, memang ada jugak I b ...
truly Post at 28-10-2011 23:58

    ooo.....kalau u tulis lirik lagi bagus rasanya..... I ada la tulis suka2, tapi lagu rap (hip hop) la.....

truly

Truly..

To the sweet time that we hardly remembered..
River that flows carrying dreams defeated
Under the moon the stars and morning mist
Lights turned to darkness


Yearning for love you once were, I submit to the sorrow.

truly

Unmarked Grave

When it was your turn

I did not see your footstep

     In the house that was once fabricated in stone

     Dreams shattered, we decided to furnish it now with regrets.

What choice do I have?

That I had the lock and key

finally rested at sea

in an unmarked grave, stories of you and me.

But for ending this tragic

I will forgive you should you refused to see the logic.

lkick2113

tru...kenal tak Emily Dickinson??

truly

tru...kenal tak Emily Dickinson??
lkick2113 Post at 4-1-2012 23:22

American poet tu kan, kenapa?

lkick2113

American poet tu kan, kenapa?
truly Post at 4-1-2012 23:25

    yup.....poem yg mana yg u minat hasil karya dia???

truly

yup.....poem yg mana yg u minat hasil karya dia???
lkick2113 Post at 4-1-2012 23:44

Tak ada any particular one. banyak la baca, dulu dalam english kelas pun kena ambil poem dia ni.

lkick2113

Tak ada any particular one. banyak la baca, dulu dalam english kelas pun kena ambil poem dia ni.
truly Post at 4-1-2012 23:47

    poem yg mana satu???

cmf_raudah

rupanya budak2 CI ni pandai berpoem

truly

rupanya budak2 CI ni pandai berpoem
cmf_raudah Post at 5-1-2012 09:44

Bila jemu bertengkar, tulis poem pula eheh.


thanks sebab sudi baca by the way.