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Originally posted by IrvingLorenzo at 6-5-2006 09:35 PM
cassio, thats a nice one. AND a real haiku....tu mmg idea u ke?? u actually included a seasonal indicator/element that is autumn..NICE ONE! keep making more...
penah dgr lebih kurang camtu..
but this one..i made it myself.. ^^ |
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Originally posted by aGuiLeHa at 6-5-2006 07:27 PM
waaa, best2!!
welcome to the club!! =)
tulis aa lagi, hihihi..
hehe..thx..
haiku mmg best arr....
umm takde idea arr skang.. |
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shaking the grave
my weeping voice
autumn wind
so how's this one
i didn't write this ^^
[ Last edited by cassiopeia at 6-5-2006 11:13 PM ] |
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Reply #46 cassiopeia's post
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nice =).....its about autumn again...try writing more...of your own that is ^_^! |
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life is so boring
an acne is growing fast
too many problems...
^_^! |
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Reply #46 cassiopeia's post
nice one!
tp mcm bukan 5, 7, 5 aje.. buleh jugak ye? |
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Reply #50 karlreef's post
karl jiwanggggggggggg!!! =p
sila2.. nk lagi, nk lagi.. |
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Reply #49 aGuiLeHa's post
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aahla bukan ikut 5,7,5 la...tak prasan plak.... |
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Reply #52 karlreef's post
wakakakaka.. sempat ko wat haiku ye karl, cayalahh!! =)
hati tergerak
hendak melepas tensen
london here i come!! |
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masih ingatkah
perihal masa lalu
antara kita..
hati berbisik
berbicara semula
rahsia lama..
satu persatu
kepingan luka dulu
calar semula..
mengapa dikau
tinggalkan ku sendiri
meniti hari..
tak mampu lagi
ku tahan air mata
aduh seksanya...
di pintu sepi
ku setia menanti
dikau kembali...................... |
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angin bertiup
langit cerah dan kosong
awan berkumpul... |
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leha oh leha
mengapa engkau ayu
kau memang ayu...
chewahhhh!!!^_^! |
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chewah...
umm...cassio takde idea lak la... |
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irving ku sayang
selamat kumpul kredit
irving boleh yeahhh!!!!
=) |
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kau hadir lagi
muncul satu persatu
bayangan silam... |
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aku dah mandi
sungguh segar badanku
aku nak makan... |
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aku dah gila
bilalah ko nak datang
apa nak buat.... |
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kau sudah gila
jangan kau dekatiku
kau menakutkan.....
wakkkakaaka... |
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karlreef dah gila
lari dari hospital
dia dah sakit.....
wakkakakkakkakaka...... |
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irving dan karlreef
dua dua dh penin
pi makan ubat!!!
=p |
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Category: Belia & Informasi
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Post time 6-5-2006 10:42 PM
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